Dandelions

Dandelions

I’m too obsessed,

So I bite my tongue

Because it may lead into

The depths of  hopelessness.

It’s easy to assist,

But I’m too intimate to

Just be friends.

Of course we can be,

But that’ll be my death

sentence.

I want you to

have it all.

Not just a piece of me.

I want to create a Love

Dynasty that’ll leave you

delighted like lions rolling around

in dandelions.

Reviews

[ANTO]

It all or nothing with the narrator here. No half-measures. It an intensity that could scare all but the most determined so that makes the search even harder - the options are much narrower for hearts that want to fall quickly and wholly into love. The romanticised notion of 'The One' is probably at work here. Believeing in movies and songs and yes even poems help set us up for the great disappointment
The final lasting image of the lions is wonderful, Sin.
Good write my friend.
:))

[sinNsincerity]

Haha toche' Anto. Thank you for reading and leaving a note sir!

[ANTO]

You're welcome Sin. :)

[AaronFreitas]

Nice imagery in this piece with the lions... good work my friend. I love the way you think :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Aaron. Very much appreciated!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

"delighted like lions rolling around
in dandelions."
That is such a cute imagery! Big kitties rolling in dandelions. Don't they wish they had those in their safaris! I think that's what love is, delight and freedom.

[sinNsincerity]

Just what I was aiming for. I am so glad that you enjoyed Nadia.
Thank you for reading and leaving a note.

[sereenaoutloud]

beautiful write. Love the image of the dandelions and lions...very creative! awesome sweet sin :)

[sinNsincerity]

Hah!, Thank you so much Sereena! I love the image also.

[Madhu]

This is an awesome write! It's vividly expressed. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Madhu!

[nazia]

A love dynasty to create.. What a huge thing to say.. I wish you succeed in doing that. A emotional piece my friend. loved it :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Nazia!

[Elisa]

I love the final image of lions rolling in dandelions!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Elisa!

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece again! Lions and dandelions ridiculously cool:)
Great emotions expressed, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you James!

[wordman]

a great thought my friend,makes a beautiful back drop

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you friend. I'm glad that you thought so.

[~]

What a beautiful write. I really like the images of dandelions and the lions. A love pristine.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Moonskittles. It means a great deal coming from you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[~]

awww. always welcome!!