There is no Perfect One

There is no perfect one.

To justify myself makes me a liar!

Although it sounds wonderfully good to do so,

I remain vain with the good wisdom in my brain.

In the strangest of places is where I see beyond the faces.

But they don’t know who I am...

My greatest fear is that they don't put flesh and blood to my name.

This has me so far removed.

Things are recorded with extra reality.

Paint the picture...

If I live like them,

They’ll accept me.

Most live like this

Except for me.

Remaining Strangely!

It's so simple.

You go beyond me just to grow claim to power!

You’re establishing something factual,

Specific,

And regarding a promise...

Seeing yourself in some dimension other than this reality frightens you,

So you’re confined to the five senses.

Do you know who you are?

How does this apply to you today?

This chapter stands alone.

It’s something intangible to hold onto!

Not willing to acknowledge our own sins,

So we place others in front of the sun before ourselves

To hide from ourselves.

Loving the unlovable.

I’m loving to see you love!

Put flesh and blood to that!

It’s all too good,

All too important!

Think so you can thought.

If you think thought before it is done,

Then it is already done!

How deep in the mud did you travel before you got stuck?

Eyes covered in muck.

Tongue getting use to the taste of disgust!

What did it feel like?

I welcome all people into my life.

Especially the type that feel like they don't fjt in,

So they feel ovt of place and just want to kill

Instead of giving a shout

All just because they really needed a hug.

Come in!

This is the reality of life.

The greater the life,

The greater the challenge,

Comes with the greatest temptation

And then comes the greatest fall.

What remains?

An abundance of love

Reviews

[Abilash Uttama]

This is a wonderful poem with very strong message, it's in human nature to get others to like us and sometimes for this purpose we do something which we would haven't done otherwise. Next thing we are acting totally different from our true behaviour just to be part of a group which we don't need to.
Amazing work!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Ishita Dixit]

When you said you only take in the left outs, i felt a major Awww developing in me.Most people we meet are pretentious. They love to point out flaws while believing themselves to be flawless.Sad but true.The poem gets a 100 from me and you get a hug,*hugs virtually*

[sinNsincerity]

It is true though, that's why in most situation I play the silent type because I just love to hear people talk their bull, but not only that, I know I'm drenched with flaws, so who am I to judge...
Thank you for reading Ishita!

[Yanina McKnight]

This piece is very psychological and real. Truth comes with reality, one must go in-front of him/herself to paint the real picture.
As this poem progressed, it went from a specific feeling (oneself) to a general, universal statement.
The rhetorical questions are an expression of one's own confusion in life.
Life is "An abundance of love!". The conclusion is all the same if we take the time to see our own reality.

This poem inspired me to converse with my own thoughts.
I love it.

-Yanina

[sinNsincerity]

Love is the only piece of life that gives us hope I believe so...
It's everything.

[Yanina McKnight]

I believe the same, love and happiness are strong elements, if one takes the time to discover them in their selves.

[sinNsincerity]

Very true!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay... The poem is very well written... But tell me, what is the exact meaning behind the words?

[sinNsincerity]

Can you read it over and over, and then tell me what is it means to you..?

[Jamestown]

I agree with the stanza Anto hits on, I just see so much truth and
Substance in it and you know as well as I do people give into that
non sense all the time, great piece Sin, keep up the high quality
work, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you brother! I always love to hear what you think and appreciate your time!
T.C.C.I.C

[SavyNess]

WOW

I absolutely love this, much passion invested in it and you can most definitely tell.
I could feel the emotions flood my body stanza by stanza.
Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your writing.

[sinNsincerity]

This mad me smile! Thank you Ness for spending the time to read and leave a note.
I look forward to hearing what you think about my other work!
T.C.C.I.C

[SavyNess]

Absolutely my pleasure, I am glad I could do that for you, every great writer deserves the right audience!
I look forward to reading them :-)

[ANTO]

"If I live like them,
They’ll accept me.
Most live like this
Except for me." - I really found this clever rhyming Sin

"Loving the unlovable.
I’m loving to see you love! " - very true words. The bigger the effort the greater the reward. Holding on to hate will attract its ilk.

Your humility abounds here Sin. Thanks for the RR, my friend.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Anto! I've been looking forward to hearing what you thought about this one.
T.C.C.I.C

[ANTO]

It is intense but very readable and relatable Sin - more power to your pen my friend.