There is no Perfect One

There is no perfect one.

To justify myself makes me a liar!

Although it sounds wonderfully good to do so,

I remain vain with the good wisdom in my brain.

In the strangest of places is where I see beyond the faces.

But they don’t know who I am...

My greatest fear is that they don't put flesh and blood to my name.

This has me so far removed.

Things are recorded with extra reality.

Paint the picture...

If I live like them,

They’ll accept me.

Most live like this

Except for me.

Remaining Strangely!

It's so simple.

You go beyond me just to grow claim to power!

You’re establishing something factual,

Specific,

And regarding a promise...

Seeing yourself in some dimension other than this reality frightens you,

So you’re confined to the five senses.

Do you know who you are?

How does this apply to you today?

This chapter stands alone.

It’s something intangible to hold onto!

Not willing to acknowledge our own sins,

So we place others in front of the sun before ourselves

To hide from ourselves.

Loving the unlovable.

I’m loving to see you love!

Put flesh and blood to that!

It’s all too good,

All too important!

Think so you can thought.

If you think thought before it is done,

Then it is already done!

How deep in the mud did you travel before you got stuck?

Eyes covered in muck.

Tongue getting use to the taste of disgust!

What did it feel like?

I welcome all people into my life.

Especially the type that feel like they don't fjt in,

So they feel ovt of place and just want to kill

Instead of giving a shout

All just because they really needed a hug.

Come in!

This is the reality of life.

The greater the life,

The greater the challenge,

Comes with the greatest temptation

And then comes the greatest fall.

What remains?

An abundance of love

Reviews

[Abilash Uttama]

This is a wonderful poem with very strong message, it's in human nature to get others to like us and sometimes for this purpose we do something which we would haven't done otherwise. Next thing we are acting totally different from our true behaviour just to be part of a group which we don't need to.
Amazing work!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Jen]

This is the perfect one! Once again Sin, you write with boldness and truth. I really like it. There is alot of wisdom in between those lines, for someone so young....Bravo!

[sinNsincerity]

I may be young, but I believe wisdom comes with experience and I have Experienced a lot in 25 years.
Los Angeles will do that to you.
Thank you for reading Jen!

[Sindu]

So much filled with anger, pain, confusion... loud and goes clam, serene. Filled with love, appreciation.
Love the lines in this. Better to not fit in and be a part of misfits and be loved than fit in and be isolated.

[sinNsincerity]

Exactly! Thank you for reading Sindu!

[Sydney]

This has a great message. I love the outlook on life you portray here. Nice work friend

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[sereenaoutloud]

wow this is strong and deep SweetSin. Do not Ever follow the masses , stand out be true to you. We are not toy solider all cast in the same mold . Its hard to feel like you do not fit in (i know ) but i would rather stand alone then follow along!
Again you amaze me with your writing, they just keep getting better and better !! So i think you get the idea that i love it ..lol

[sinNsincerity]

Likewise, rather be alone than follow.
Thank you Sereena. I admire you, so it's a pleasure.

[Ruth]

Humbleness is a virtue and so many lost that quality...as always, a spectacular display of the human's trials through this realm of existence...

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ruth, lost only have some lost, or have yet to find... some don't don't see humbleness as a virtue at all.

[Rana]

Lots of tiny gems of thoughts studded in here. All out of the observations, also experience of the real world. Did also love all those profound questions that popped in the middle. "In the strangest of places is where I see beyond the faces" - this was amazing. Could relate to so much from here. It's all so nicely done.

[sinNsincerity]

I wrote that line because the people I meet in the streets, the ones that approach me and in my head I'm saying, "oh God, what do you want?"
They have been one of thee most interesting people I have met, so that was for them...
Thank you for reading, I'm glad that you could relate!

[nazia]

this is the ultimate truth my friend. There is no perfect one....
the way you welcome all the imperfections is so inspiring. the effort you put in to accept the flaws makes you a really humble person.
Impressive :)

[sinNsincerity]

This is no perfect one and even the anointed can be deceived.
It is really about accepting our flaws, so that we may better ourselves and it's day by day...
Thank you for reading Nazia!

[TheOne&Only]

Very touching and inspiring my friend...

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[alf]

Hi there. This takes more than one read to absorb all that is said, but after the third, I began to grasp the depth of thought that you have injected into this poem. If I live like them they'll accept me -- how sad is that statement!! conformity is the catchphrase nowadays. Acceptance only comes if you fit the mould!!! How you have expose the shallow nature of the world!!! So very glad you stand for who you are!!! and so true, if you stand fast, others will fly past . . . and fall, where a good person waits!!! Loved this. loved it heaps, but I an after all, a realist, as indeed are you!! alf

[sinNsincerity]

Depth or none, every poem should be read more than a few times and I'm glad that you did.
Come to think of it conformity has a exist for centuries, we just don kill people now for being autonomous.
Thank You for reading!

[wordman]

hard decisions in life,to be popular you must run with the crowd,nut to be honest with your self,
and live like your supposed to,then you are a minorty

[sinNsincerity]

I used to see myself as the outkast when when I was younger, but really everyone is different and is great to meet as long as we be honest with on another...
Thank you for reading.

[wordman]

you are welcome