Nice Guys Finnish Last

They say nice guys finish last...

Well at last, I'll be the one you'll finally remember

And you're dreaming that I'll come fast.

I have you thinking that next season will be the reason for believing,

But by the time I arrive, I'll be part of your past.

Letting time pass and I hate to leave your heart in a cast,

Let alone a scare,

But know my signature will remain in your soul vast even when I'm at far.

Behind the line?

I?

Can never place you in the back of my mind.

My eyes are your memory.

It's always there to greet me like the early morning sunshine.

Now you can understand why I was so blind when you just said hi.

Reviews

[Midsummer's Pint]

As one to remembered...

As to be one to finish before other's have gotten known as..

Quickly disguising something which deep_-er than other realize it being..

Reason within the season to liked to be in the next to have it coming to but...

Come but gone... Dezerted, vast feeling coming at Ya... not to realize whence by You.....

Gone too close? coming too far to be there to affect so...


Far'ther on.. at the front... getting hit.. being shot at...

Seeing what is there to be seen... Through to it to handled be...

Rising, giving warmth... Being shocked... blind to the contact one stare of the eyes...

Flústered one being to see own feeling to be manifested....

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[MsJewel]

There are so many great lines in this well written poem.
They say nice guys finish last...
Well at last, I'll be the one you'll finally remember... I love this.
It truly is a delight to read your words.

Julie

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Julie!
I'm really happy that you enjoyed them.
Always a pleasure.

[jeannemarie coulter]

all the times we said "hi" hoping for more...well written...thank you

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[wordman]

she waited to long,now shes left behind

[sinNsincerity]

haha yep
Thank you for reading Wordman!

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Maja]

One thing I noticed about your work (that I've read so far) is that you have this knack for wordplay.

"Behind the line?
I?
Can never place you in the back of my mind."

Great job. The title though?

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Maja,I'm okay with them...
Yea, I don't like title's so much.

[ANTO]

Your just a romantic soul like the rest of us Sin. This is an admission of the guilt of being one. We are of the same ilk, you and I.
I liked the dialogue mid-poem "Behind the line? I ? " - adds a whole different dimension to this.
Well penned my friend.:)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Anto! I'm glad you liked that part and felt so.

[Jamestown]

Great flowing write, with much truth and honesty!
I can relate with much of this write and don't necessarily
like that, but can't do much about it:( Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Hash thank you James!

[Jamestown]

He he, welcome:)