Nice Guys Finnish Last

They say nice guys finish last...

Well at last, I'll be the one you'll finally remember

And you're dreaming that I'll come fast.

I have you thinking that next season will be the reason for believing,

But by the time I arrive, I'll be part of your past.

Letting time pass and I hate to leave your heart in a cast,

Let alone a scare,

But know my signature will remain in your soul vast even when I'm at far.

Behind the line?

I?

Can never place you in the back of my mind.

My eyes are your memory.

It's always there to greet me like the early morning sunshine.

Now you can understand why I was so blind when you just said hi.

Reviews

[Midsummer's Pint]

As one to remembered...

As to be one to finish before other's have gotten known as..

Quickly disguising something which deep_-er than other realize it being..

Reason within the season to liked to be in the next to have it coming to but...

Come but gone... Dezerted, vast feeling coming at Ya... not to realize whence by You.....

Gone too close? coming too far to be there to affect so...


Far'ther on.. at the front... getting hit.. being shot at...

Seeing what is there to be seen... Through to it to handled be...

Rising, giving warmth... Being shocked... blind to the contact one stare of the eyes...

Flústered one being to see own feeling to be manifested....

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[dan]

Just a beautiful story of a love's genesis, looking back and describing the feel of remembrance, the feel of real emotional love, the feel of joy. A very nicely written piece. take care...dan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Good poem, Sin. Liked it very much :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

A pleasure! Thank you so much Rudi.

[Samaira]

I'm usually not good at romance. But I really liked that line - I have you thinking that next season will be the reason for believing. It is a beautiful line.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for think so and If you enjoyed that line, I would say you do have some romance in there somewhere... =D

[marcus]

good one, I liked it!!!!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Marcus!

[Passengerr]

Brilliant piece Sin.. That line 'but by the time i arrive i'll be part of your past''had me thinking. Brilliant.

[sinNsincerity]

That's awesome dude! I would love to hear what it made you think...?

[sereenaoutloud]

i literally want to write it all back to you line for line and tell you how great it all is. So many fabulous plays on words here Bestie!!
Brilliant! :))
Totally giving you a high five right now! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Hey, I'll take it! HIGH 5 BACK AT CHA!!!
You truly are the best Sereena. Thank you so much!read moreHey, I'll take it! HIGH 5 BACK AT CHA!!!
You truly are the best Sereena. Thank you so much!
Totally worth the write!

[TheOne&Only]

I see " I" In "You",...Love it, very creative with this one.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you did hon, thank you!

[Koari]

Pretty good read. Not sure what to comment on it, I like it all around.

[sinNsincerity]

That's all good! Thank you so much for reading. I highly appreciate it.

[Annacate]

Keep it coming, Sin. This one is great. It reminds me of a creative writing class I took in college. Your words all mixed up make me want to try writing poetry again.

Nice guys don't finish last! (By the way, it's only got one 'n' unless you're from Finland.) ;)

Warm hugs,
Anna

[sinNsincerity]

You should write what ever turns you on and gets your fire going. For awhile it was poetry, then short stories, and mow back to poetry...
Thank you Anna, hugs back at ya!

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Loved the beginning and the ending was equally as strong. Well written and delightful.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!