Nice Guys Finnish Last

They say nice guys finish last...

Well at last, I'll be the one you'll finally remember

And you're dreaming that I'll come fast.

I have you thinking that next season will be the reason for believing,

But by the time I arrive, I'll be part of your past.

Letting time pass and I hate to leave your heart in a cast,

Let alone a scare,

But know my signature will remain in your soul vast even when I'm at far.

Behind the line?

I?

Can never place you in the back of my mind.

My eyes are your memory.

It's always there to greet me like the early morning sunshine.

Now you can understand why I was so blind when you just said hi.

Reviews

[Midsummer's Pint]

As one to remembered...

As to be one to finish before other's have gotten known as..

Quickly disguising something which deep_-er than other realize it being..

Reason within the season to liked to be in the next to have it coming to but...

Come but gone... Dezerted, vast feeling coming at Ya... not to realize whence by You.....

Gone too close? coming too far to be there to affect so...


Far'ther on.. at the front... getting hit.. being shot at...

Seeing what is there to be seen... Through to it to handled be...

Rising, giving warmth... Being shocked... blind to the contact one stare of the eyes...

Flústered one being to see own feeling to be manifested....

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Sai]

Nicely written; nice guys finish last because they are the ones we usually end up marrying. Same with nice girls. :)

[sinNsincerity]

I've been single for so long due to having my heart broken time after time after time. It has left me restless and so afraid to give it try again. My relationships always start off smooth like mash potatoes, but women always take advantage of my heart and play me for a fool. It drives me insane and leads me into a very unhealthy place. I'm almost ready to give up. I think I have already...

[Terry O'Leary]

Insightful piece... well done!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Terry.

[Sailor Moon]

"But by the time I arrive, I'll be part of your past."
Love this line. good work.

[sinNsincerity]

Ah, me too!

[TM]

This was very deep and provoked thought. Good job with this

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Amy R]

such a cute piece!
enjoyed reading this...
thanks for sharing :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm more than glad that you did, thank you Amy.

[Amy R]

ur welcome!!

[Hope Rose]

This is very good. Keep it up. I love how there's a hint of guilt and regret in it, it makes it very dramatic and it hits people hard

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm glad you'd enjoyed it!

[B. Boileau]

Great flow and more to the point a delightful melancholy piece.
as always a pleasure reading your stuff.

bill

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Bill!

[Whitney]

I love this so much. The "Behind the line? I?" part is my favorite. I really dig the emotion in it!

[sinNsincerity]

Yea, I love how it stalls the poem for a sec.
I'm really glad that you did dig it =D