Never Dead

Haven’t written in weeks.

Haven’t slept in weeks.

Why?

Because I think way too much,

So my mind is never at peace,

So if I died tonight, I’ll never rest in peace.

Never dead.

Or at least these are the thoughts inside of my head.

Laying my thoughts over my bed,

So I’ll know what is needed to be said during the right moment.

So upset because I haven’t become what they have said.

Well I don’t care what is said,

So they can remain upset while I take another hit.

Same heart as when I was a kid.

Soul was once lost,

But came to me like the sun set does to the west.

Now I don’t want to let you into my world because it’s mine to protect.

I still love you,

But time is still whenever we are together,

So how can we ever move on?

Playing a new song as I inhale this thick smoke from the bong.

Who am I to belong?

Feeling wrong,

(Wong hehe),

But is it alright that I let you out of my sight while I closed my eyes to enjoy my high?

Goodbye to tonight..,

So for right now,

I’ll settle for lust and a lack of trust that has me at a rust.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right.
"Because I think way too much,
So my mind is never at peace,
So if I died tonight, I’ll never rest in peace.
Never dead."
Death is the question. Dead is dead. Last rest is lonely grave and forgotten. The poem was filled with frustration and looking for some purpose. I enjoyed the poem. Made me think tonight. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

I'm always glad to hear that it made someone think, so that's awesome!
Thank you for reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to keep a old man thinking and you are welcome.

[Saddam]

Creative and well penned too with a rhythmic flow.
Everyone had own idea and style and you are best at your hand.
I like it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[Saddam]

Most welcome friend....

[KWP]

a nice flow of words delivered from a cloud of hazy green smoke - hmmmm hungry ?

hehehe

you have such great flow .. I tell you that all the time I know ... but it sure makes it fun to read :)

[sinNsincerity]

I eat before smoking haha
That's why I call THC "The Haunted Conscious."
No worries, there's isn't a chance that I'll ever get tired of hear you say that.
Thank you so much for reading.

[Annacate]

I love this poem. I wanted to yell out, "No! Don't close your eyes and inhale. Sit with the pain. Breath air instead!"

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ana =D

[Frozen Eyes]

Outburst of emotions nicely organized :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Frozen Eyes!

[Jamestown]

Another great flowing heartfelt piece my bro!
Lost love is a tough thing to get over and the
thoughts race through our minds like JR at
Daytona, but like the race they eventually will
come to an end and another race will be in front
of us to try to win:) All in due time, PTL!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you bro!
Never racing, just cruising with some Saturday night car tunes! haha =D

[steven sundell]

As an unknown, still fellow writer, I applaud your brutal yet beautifully worded poem obviously inspired by great pain and loss. As one whom sadly has recently lost my mom, I thank you for expressing that which I am still too consumed with pain to be able to do so without breaking down . still, though you must feel alone, please believe me when I say you are not. I for one feel for your loss and also feel ineffably lost inside the void that presently has taken place my mother, I hope someday the sun set might deliver MY lost soul.
Bless you for expresthe sing, that which I am still too broken, to express with any poetic verse.
Steven

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Steven and I'm sorry to hear about your loss.
All you can do is keep her in your prayers and she'll be listening to you.

[jeannemarie coulter]

Because I think way too much,

So my mind is never at peace,

So if I died tonight I’ll never rest in peace.

Never dead.

Or at least these are the thoughts inside of my head.

Laying my thoughts over my bed,

So I’ll know what is needed to be said during the right momen


these lines really touched my soul...very fine penning as a whole...thank you

[sinNsincerity]

Those are one of my favorite lines that I have created.
It makes me happy that they touched your soul!

[J.R.H.]

I enjoyed it. It was laid-back and the flow was consistent.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you J.R.H., I'm glad you enjoyed it!