Bacon

Bacon

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Baby you know I love you

Whether you're fully clothed or naked…

And after wake ‘n baking,

I always kiss you on the side of your tummy

'Cause you know I love bacon!

You laugh and say,

“Babe, stop playing.”

Then you make pig oinks.

You make my heart level up,

More like super saiyan.

No senzu beans for regeneration,

No need to press refresh,

No salutation,

‘Cause my heart is always in constant rejuvenation.

© 2015 sinNsincerity


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i am very grateful for the belly laugh your poem has given me ...sometimes we get on serious successions of poetry here and need a breather ..
"Then you make pig oinks."
i love that ... the whole image of the kiss on the tummy and oink sounds is divine laughter from angels ... i am going find my Norma and see if i can elicit such primal grunting when i kiss her tummy ...:))) i'll let you know how that goes ;) loved the read!
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i am very grateful for the belly laugh your poem has given me ...sometimes we get on serious successions of poetry here and need a breather ..
"Then you make pig oinks."
i love that ... the whole image of the kiss on the tummy and oink sounds is divine laughter from angels ... i am going find my Norma and see if i can elicit such primal grunting when i kiss her tummy ...:))) i'll let you know how that goes ;) loved the read!
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Do you have a tumblr? I feel like you would have a tumblr.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

yea, I'm rarely on it, but you are more than welcomed to check it out.
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Fabulous! I absolutely loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very entertaining poem. I love bacon too. I enjoyed your description and the poem made me smile. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is great haha! Made me smile... super creative :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


really cute and playful. i like it! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


isn't love wonderful and playful

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is so cute! it made me smile :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aloha, super saiyan... haha & bacon in the same poem...brilliant! Lovely playful read! Izzy

Posted 7 Years Ago


OMG DRAGON BALL REFERNCE! DUDE!!!
But yeah, nerded out for a second there - haha. I like this - playful and loving. Really cute. =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 26, 2015
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