Love

They say that love sucks,

But I’m telling you,

When I’m not loving my heart stops

And my life feels stuck.

Please disrupt this awkwardness with my odd sloppiness.

This nonsense may not mean anything to you

And I’m a wreck when I’m thinking about the tick-tocks.

I watch the clock with a stalk.

Whether I care or not,

My heart will erupt out of the cup of love,

Overflowing,

And spewing over like a waterfall.

The water falls from my watery eyes when my soul isn’t high

And it forces my heart to drop.

No eye drops for these red eyes.

It’s my time and I’ll never burn out.

While you were wishing you know how,

You realized that you’ll be trying forever.

With the sense of all,

I can’t seem to find the things to do to pass the time...

The things that interest me to get you off of my mind.

It feels like a lifetime,

More like eternity since I had you here with me.

Every moment peels away with every moment having a meaning and so do dreams.

I’m regenerating a minute so I can recover my innocence,

But also living like a prince with a deliverance of a humble wish!

Here’s a Kiss!

I love you!

Reviews

[JayceeC]

There are parts of this that I thought would be great in a visual poetry style, (clock - heart drop)but as I kept reading that thought slipped and I fell back into the words. I love the line " I''m regenerating a minute, so I can recover my innocence" because I think love helps you do that. You get to wipe out the old and start again.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jan.
An others love can make the old irrelevant and that is why I surround myself with good vibes and stray away from wasted energy...

[JayceeC]

Very good choice. Positive people draw positive energy which also means other positive people. It's a good way to find love.

[Passengerr]

Amazing expression of love in writing Sin, i think few times 'love is evol'(your line).. But most times the right ones are truly beautiful.

[sinNsincerity]

You're awesome!
Truly for the most part, the right ones are beautiful.
Thank you for reading Richie!

[Passengerr]

You're welcome man.

[Passengerr]

You're welcome man.

[Ana B.]

Endearing, beautiful poetry. There is nothing sweeter than hearing (reading) a man writing about love.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Ana!
I highly appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can suck and can be the best days of our life.
"Here’s a Kiss!
I love you!"
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awwww.. Love is really very very STRONG! Once you fall truly, no matter what you do, you can never forget. Amazing Poem. I love love these lines " They say that love sucks,
But I’m telling you,
When I’m not loving my heart stops
And my life feels stuck."
WOW! Love your Poem! Keep it up! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Dreamer! It is very strong and I agree. I have always believed that love was never born to say goodbye.
Thank you for reading.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Same here. You know I believe "Love makes life beautifully difficult" and I love it!
You are welcome! :)

[Shae]

This is so beautiful. I could feel every bit of passion you wrote this with. Keep writing, always !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Shae! That really means so much.

[yvo miki]

this is very sad and interesting I love the way it flows makes me wanna read more

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that it gave you those feelings.
Thank you for reading hon!

[yvo miki]

ur welcome ...:)

[Real Inspiration]

This is truly amazing! The way it ends hooks me on even more than the way it began!

[sinNsincerity]

That is truly amazing! I'm enjoying your reviews!

[Real Inspiration]

As you enjoy my reviews, I enjoy reading your writes.

[Ruth]

Love is indeed a balm to the seconds...the heart likes to feel alive...beautifully poised hon ...

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you see it that way Ruth =D
Thank you for reading!

[B]

Very sweet poem

I enjoyed that

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Rana]

A nice cocoon of thoughts from a poet's brain. Liked it and specially the imagery in these lines:

"My heart will erupt out of the cup of love,
Overflowing,
And spewing over like a waterfall."

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed those lines. They mean a lot to me.
Thank you for reading!