You Took the time

You took the time to notice me and say hi,

And that brightens my day!

May it be that I was inside of your brain for at least a second this day?

If nothing at all, that still has to mean something…

If lightning strikes this place today again, then maybe I’ll be able to catch some sleep and dream.

Wake up!

Surely when we speak my soul is free from all of the madness that is presented to me.

Whisking along with the fallen leaves that never get to view spring.

I’m a fallen angel trying to give you all of my angles, while I search for a way out of the Bermuda Triangle.

Oh my, I’m just trying to make it back to the heavenly, but how can I when my heart has left me and remains with thee?

My whispers buzz in your ears like a bee, so please don’t swipe them away to not be comprehended when coming to the realization of the days when we can no longer be.

Can you find a way to keep me in your stare my dear?

Do you care that when I close my eyes you are still there?

Do you care that you are the one that holds all of my care?

For I care not for me, but I care too much about you.

My heart is bear,

Naked!

Open!

Is it fair to say that it’s not fair that your heart isn’t mine to wear?

These are the thoughts and the dilemma that haunt my mind.

Is it insanity or pure genius?

Is it clever or just whatever?

I’m cold and there’s no sweater that can comfort me in this lonesome dreadful weather.

A butterfly to a caterpillar…
A rare kind to never be seen, even if I waited ‘till forever...

If I only knew, knew that a kiss would never exist beyond an instant of daydreaming.

For you are the voice that seduces my mind when I’m alone.

I think about you just to pass the time…

Reviews

[Devious13]

omg ....
sometime we dont listen to the things that are being said, sometimes we forget who we really really are , sometimes without us knowing we can push our love away , I know the feeling cause i once felt it so hard ,no push was needed i ran from love that day. Our , thoughts are treasures ,minds are sacred grounds ,labryinths for the insane , to pass the time,to fill your day , in a prison id think youd lay ,maybe your own, maybe from love , maybe god sent you from upabove??
love the details that you have in almost everything you write , and though its felt as i have told you many times before its like you are in my head messing with my thoughts i see the pieces sometimes for more but i can relate to everyone , and as usual it was immediate ,,,,, the .....
attraction that is :]

[Jamestown]

Another piece with much depth and masterful wording! The fallen angel line is sweet
not that the rest isn't, but you know your brother and the whole GOD thing, lol:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you brother James, I always appreciate what you have to say! =D

[Peaches]

This kind of poem gives me such an uplifting mood and makes me want to have a crush again.
The only thing I thought that could have been better is that if the poetry was a little bit more consistent. It seems to drag onto different directions and then all of a sudden come back to the main theme.

MY FAVORITE LINE WAS "For you are the voice that seduces my mind when I’m alone.". I was like damn! That hit me in so many areas of my heart.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Peaches, I'm more than glad that line made and impact =D