Hi Sin in Sincerity. This is a beautiful write!!! Love the honesty that flows from the words, there are several lines that standout fractionally, but tit would detract from the whole, if took them from the entirety!! Loved this, loved the fact you give accolades to a friend who offers inspiration. hell, just love the whole damned presentation, alf
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9 Years Ago
I had to write about her. Our relationship was simply just a friendship, but I have never fell in lo.. read moreI had to write about her. Our relationship was simply just a friendship, but I have never fell in love with a women and felt like she seen me for who I really am. And that played great dividends to me.
I haven't spoken to hear in years because we have both got lost in the world.
I will always love her because she was the first to tell me that my writing was really good and gave me the confidence to share my writing with the world.
A warm golden poem, like the Rays of the Sun radiating in winter. A tranquil and loving tone echoes thru out. Idk if this is a real person, but I think there is an Ashley Marie on writers cafe (:
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9 Years Ago
Thank you Chad! The Ashley that I speak of is an old friend I use to know when I was living in Los A.. read moreThank you Chad! The Ashley that I speak of is an old friend I use to know when I was living in Los Angeles a few years back.
This was an old write and holds so much sentiment with me, so I'm glad you read this. It rook me back...
Hi Sin in Sincerity. This is a beautiful write!!! Love the honesty that flows from the words, there are several lines that standout fractionally, but tit would detract from the whole, if took them from the entirety!! Loved this, loved the fact you give accolades to a friend who offers inspiration. hell, just love the whole damned presentation, alf
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I had to write about her. Our relationship was simply just a friendship, but I have never fell in lo.. read moreI had to write about her. Our relationship was simply just a friendship, but I have never fell in love with a women and felt like she seen me for who I really am. And that played great dividends to me.
I haven't spoken to hear in years because we have both got lost in the world.
I will always love her because she was the first to tell me that my writing was really good and gave me the confidence to share my writing with the world.
"F**k the fame, because it'll most likely drive me even more insane." Love that line! But also love the whole poem! I have a person in my life that is supportive too and I really appreciate him, as you obviously appreciate her! Wonderful!
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9 Years Ago
Thank you Harley!
That's so great to have a person in our lives like that.
I absolutely adore this.
One, for the poetry and rhyme but even more so because it is a factual reference to a friend who inspired you.
Personal muses are vital and I hope she feels as privileged as she is about this write.
Keep up the great work, I agree with her, it will go as far as you let it!
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9 Years Ago
Thank you Ness! This poem is very dear to me and I am reminded of my friend each time I write. .. read moreThank you Ness! This poem is very dear to me and I am reminded of my friend each time I write.
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