Chosen

Chosen

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I have been chosen to place a foundation upon this world.

Showing my faith,

Indeed spilling out my soul.

Its blood decorates the stone.

Giving you a visual of me: the unknown.

To be known and to allow you to have the knowing that you are not alone.

I’m blessed to have eyes and ears.

To see and hear beauty, but will you take the time to notice?

Accept and embrace everything!

Throw the hate and grudges away please!

Although we cannot see grace, we are all standing in it.

Eulogia: good words giving a connection to speak with you revealing the truth and nothing but it.

I’m like anything you have ever, or will come across.

I’m not perfect.

Every day I carry my cross on my back.

I’m dragging my sins to salvation, so they’ll be forgiven.

There’s freedom to do stupid things, freedom to make mistakes because I am human.

I’m not a wind up being.

I have my own mind and I make my own choices, so for that I am thankful.

Am I existing for myself, or existing for you?

I’ll love and cater to you all because I love to see your smile and no matter the struggle, it’ll all be worth my while!

I’m taking off enough time, so I can give you all of mine.

I will never hold back, so please allow this to come to life.

Of all eons of time I’m just a small fraction.

Just to have an impact on one soul will be my satisfaction.

The foundation for me can be the foundation for you because we are all chosen!

If you understand this, let it be told.

Take it back, life, love it!

© 2015 sinNsincerity


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"There’s freedom to do stupid things, freedom to make mistakes because I am human," as a virgo woman this concept is always a struggle to grasp. Cause being a perfectionist is one of my major character flaws, so that line was especially special to me.

The message was clear and precise and relatable! I enjoyed it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Years Ago

I know plenty of Virgos and I get along with them quite well< but I'm a cancer, so I pretty much get.. read more



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Fantastic write and message(s) life is too short we shouldn't hold grudges, we should all learn to spread the love, give more of ourselves than we take.
I especially love;
" Of all eons of time I’m just a small fraction.
Just to have an impact on one soul will be my satisfaction."

Marvelous!! Sweet Sin :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sereena! I love that quote as well.
Always a pleasure!
this hit home for me....(bitter sweet kind of feeling) love it when words can make me "Feel"...for someone like me thats a blessing.. :) thanks for sharing...

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad to hear that.That's my goal =D
This is beautiful I love the format and flow thank you for sharing my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you thought so. Thank you!
I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending.
"The foundation for me can be the foundation for you because we are all chosen!
If you understand this, let it be told.
Take it back, life, love it!"
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for leaving a note! i'm glad you agree because it's true...
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I loved this as a self statement, Sin. What I think you need to do here though, Is go through and look at the pronouns. There are places that I think you are referring to God as You not your reader. capitalize those places if that is the case. It gets a bit confusing with all of the pronouns. If you are only talking to the reader, fine but there are places that sound like it could be either. Leaving a song from one of my fave groups. It's audio only both for first. one is link for Google Play the other is youtube. Fits with this. Enjoy.

https://play.google.com/music/m/Trybeikqk43vz6d6o6splu76zte

https://youtu.be/uQicTjv3oVE


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Jan, I always appreciate it!
Although we cannot see grace, we are all standing in it.

Just to have an impact on one soul will be my satisfaction.

your words have a great power to enchant and forgive especially the two quoted above...you are truly blessed with insight and the ability to communicate...thank you...jc

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jeanne, I'm glad you like those quotes. They both mean a lot to me, so I am happy they sto.. read more
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This is a great poem! Happiness should be spread & this is certainly one way to get that going!

- Brittney

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank for reading Brittney, indeed it should be spread around when ever we can.
613

9 Years Ago

Couldn't agree more!
Spreading the love, eh?
If its this way, we won't mind! :P
I loved the message and the overall write.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ishita, Always appreciated!
"I'm taking off enough time, so i can give you all of mine." Gave me chills. This is so good! Please, never stop writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad they did! Thank you.
Spreading happiness, huh?

I can dig that. We need it in this world. x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Of course, Always!

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