"There’s freedom to do stupid things, freedom to make mistakes because I am human," as a virgo woman this concept is always a struggle to grasp. Cause being a perfectionist is one of my major character flaws, so that line was especially special to me.
The message was clear and precise and relatable! I enjoyed it!
Posted 8 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I know plenty of Virgos and I get along with them quite well< but I'm a cancer, so I pretty much get.. read moreI know plenty of Virgos and I get along with them quite well< but I'm a cancer, so I pretty much get along with everyone.
I wouldn't call it a flaw. You just like to get things done that's all.
And if I were to call them flaws, we can't change them. They will always be there, all we can do i make adjustments and correct them.
I'm so glad that you could relate and that a connection was made Tionge. That means the world to me!
Great piece. There's a touch of intensity that drags the reader in, which makes it even better. I like the first few lines, giving such imagery to hint at your meaning and intentions that were poured into this poem. Very good job. Stay inspired.
God bless you, this is such a beautiful poem, it's freedom, it's love, it's comfort, it's faith, it's comforting. Thank you for sharing this, a poem like this is one of a kind, different and could change the world.
"There’s freedom to do stupid things, freedom to make mistakes because I am human," as a virgo woman this concept is always a struggle to grasp. Cause being a perfectionist is one of my major character flaws, so that line was especially special to me.
The message was clear and precise and relatable! I enjoyed it!
Posted 8 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I know plenty of Virgos and I get along with them quite well< but I'm a cancer, so I pretty much get.. read moreI know plenty of Virgos and I get along with them quite well< but I'm a cancer, so I pretty much get along with everyone.
I wouldn't call it a flaw. You just like to get things done that's all.
And if I were to call them flaws, we can't change them. They will always be there, all we can do i make adjustments and correct them.
I'm so glad that you could relate and that a connection was made Tionge. That means the world to me!
I think you should put together a section of your poems just for these messages.... You will change one mind that will change the world. You are a fire stick that sparks the light to the paper...
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I did so before, but then decided to alphabetize each poem so that the may stand alone. i'm current.. read moreI did so before, but then decided to alphabetize each poem so that the may stand alone. i'm currently learning book binding and will be making my own books because publishers simply won't take the time to read my work. So when I do so, I will place them in a particular order according to themes. I have just been lacking enthusiasm as of late. You words do and have reminded me to not let that spark vanquish. And for that, I thank you Tiffany.
if ever there were a mic drop worthy moment... this would be it! This is like fresh air to a closed off world. I have nothing else to say but Amen brother amen
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I just wanted people to see what I'm really about.
Isn't that the question of the century? Or perhaps of the eons? What is life's purpose? Should I live selfishly or selflessly? Who's to judge me? For I am only human. Brava, once again.
Eons for sure. Sometimes I ask myself- what is truly my purpose, and what is the purpose behind that.. read moreEons for sure. Sometimes I ask myself- what is truly my purpose, and what is the purpose behind that purpose, and so on and so on... I just think way too much hehe
8 Years Ago
I definitely suffer from overthinking as well. I can never see to shut my brain off lol
8 Years Ago
hehe I feel you. I like to call it pleasant overthinking lol
For me, this poem gave off a dark tone and I like it! My favorite line: "Its blood decorates the stone." That is a cool imagery in my opinion. Lots of good wording and imagery!