Life or Death???

Life or death?

Keep the change!

I’m living ‘till death.

I’m loving past death!

I love you so much it’ll be my death!

And I don’t mind...

I’m whispering it from near and

Screaming it from far with my very last breath.

Must I suggest that we reflect on not what we lost,

But on what we have left.

Okay, we’re over that topic,

So let’s mark it with a check.

Would you still love me even if I didn’t bring in any checks for us to have fun with?

We’re living life in bliss and you’re a hot chick with nice breasts,

And the thought of you naked has me erect!

I’m sorry doll,

But sometimes I can be a hot mess!

I can be a wreck and I’m so stressed,

But I’m alive and that makes me blessed.

I’m not the best,

But I’ll always give you the best of me,

The honest me,

And the humble me.

Does that make me the best?

No it doesn’t,

It just makes me.

I won’t change because I’ll always be direct.

I love too much,

So f**k lust when it comes between us.

I’m an open minded person with an open heart in my chest.

Trust me!

Why do you think it was so easy for us to connect?

Reviews

[Rusteangi Ruba]

YOUR POEM IS SO TOUCHING..
POEM DEEPLY SPEAKS ABOUT THE LOVE IN A RELATIONSHIP.
I like your anger on me, shout over me, scream at me, and calling back to you after that.

I cant say it is short temper, but it is the feeling one with another, "you are just for me". No body is so strong, and it is not weakness I know, but a need.
THIS MAKES A REAL SENSE.
YOU MADE YOUR QUESTIONS VERY POETIC IN THE SENSE.
WELL DONE DEAR
RJ

[sinNsincerity]

Deep as a bottomless well . . .

[Perkele.7885]

Love falls somewhere between living together and lusting for one another. Some how as you two live you your life in constant flux, you have never given love a chance.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[B]

I say Life always
Choose life
You have to love living more than anything
Very open
and cool
Love it dude

[sinNsincerity]

I'm really glad that you do, Thank you =D

[MsJewel]

I like the flow of your words, as if you are spilling your thoughts and emotions upon the page - honest and heartfelt. Great writing!

:) Julie

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Julie, it's truly a pleasure!

[ANTO]

You definitely have a gift Sin. Each line connects the dots here and sometimes creates different feelings in one line - I like your style, like it muchly my friend.

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks a Honey Bunches of Oats!

[ANTO]

You're muesli welcome my friend

[wordman]

well sin,it see,s like an open letter to the one you love,great write

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Zahra]

I’m living ‘till death.
I’m loving past death!

Amazing lines. Very nicely penned

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Zahra!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Cool write. As for the question in the end... Some would say fate. Some would say love on first sight. And i say simply love.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!
A great way to think.

[Saddam]

A passionate write.
Like its intensity and flowing.
Fine art.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Saddam.

[TheOne&Only]

Im very impressed, I loved the flow to this piece. The words were spoken so forward in truth. I felt the strength... Very nice!! :)

[sinNsincerity]

That's what I love about writing the most. Thant i'm so able to put myself out there and show you all what's on my mind, how I feel, and what I believe. Pretty much every thing I'm about. And all of me, not just what people see on the outside when people look at me...

[TheOne&Only]

Yes! I'm sure majority of us who write would agree, that writing what we feel, think and believe is easier in words on a paper rather spoken out loud. Its a great way to put yourself out there. & takes a lot of courage to allow one to read the most vulnerable, intimate part of you.

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so!

[Jamestown]

Great piece brother! Isn't crazy what our minds come up with when
someone you care about so deeply is at the forefront? Another great flowing write,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

It goes places I dare not lol Thank you for reading brother James!