Life or Death???

Life or death?

Keep the change!

I’m living ‘till death.

I’m loving past death!

I love you so much it’ll be my death!

And I don’t mind...

I’m whispering it from near and

Screaming it from far with my very last breath.

Must I suggest that we reflect on not what we lost,

But on what we have left.

Okay, we’re over that topic,

So let’s mark it with a check.

Would you still love me even if I didn’t bring in any checks for us to have fun with?

We’re living life in bliss and you’re a hot chick with nice breasts,

And the thought of you naked has me erect!

I’m sorry doll,

But sometimes I can be a hot mess!

I can be a wreck and I’m so stressed,

But I’m alive and that makes me blessed.

I’m not the best,

But I’ll always give you the best of me,

The honest me,

And the humble me.

Does that make me the best?

No it doesn’t,

It just makes me.

I won’t change because I’ll always be direct.

I love too much,

So f**k lust when it comes between us.

I’m an open minded person with an open heart in my chest.

Trust me!

Why do you think it was so easy for us to connect?

Reviews

[Rusteangi Ruba]

YOUR POEM IS SO TOUCHING..
POEM DEEPLY SPEAKS ABOUT THE LOVE IN A RELATIONSHIP.
I like your anger on me, shout over me, scream at me, and calling back to you after that.

I cant say it is short temper, but it is the feeling one with another, "you are just for me". No body is so strong, and it is not weakness I know, but a need.
THIS MAKES A REAL SENSE.
YOU MADE YOUR QUESTIONS VERY POETIC IN THE SENSE.
WELL DONE DEAR
RJ

[sinNsincerity]

Deep as a bottomless well . . .

[Einstein Noodle]

honest thoughts on a deeply felt emotion ... so straight forward its almost painful ;) relevant issues that should be discussed and considered when in a committed relationship ... i hope lust never does do its damage ...even tho it can and is sometimes forgiven .. it changes things i think ...
E.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Yes it’s all in the connection but truth to self is important not materialistic things and lust is not love to connect and be inlove is different- well written🌹

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Kelly.

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I really enjoyed reading this poem. I could relate to this feeling.
Great poem

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you could relate and enjoyed it Lamour.

[JessyJacob]

Please aiyse math kaho kabhi (don't say like that anytime)

[JessyJacob]

I also say it out openly when it comes to me, this was only the reason why we are close to get connected easily.
I like your anger on me, shout over me, scream at me, and calling back to you after that.

I cant say it is short temper, but it is the feeling one with another, "you are just for me". No body is so strong, and it is not weakness I know, but a need.

Thoughts from the read of your feelings, wanted to share something. Very well written.

[Celie Rose]

I really enjoyed your poem. Trust, honesty and humility are so very important in a relationship.. Depth of your love bypasses death.You have expressed your feelings of love very well placing your cards on the table "Would you still love me even if I didn’t bring in any checks for us to have fun with? "So f**k lust when it comes between us." Well written. Keep writing

[sinNsincerity]

Awe yes, Thank you for bringing me back to this one Celie, I would agree with that for sure when speaking on trust, honesty, and humility.
I love the first quote you have pointed out. I think it's a fair question to ask when speaking on love...
Thank you once again for reading and leaving me your thoughts, I highly appreciate it!

[Terry O'Leary]

Passionate piece... well done
Terry

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Terry!

[Kathryn Desautels]

Great Writing! Keep it up, i look forward to reading more of it.

[sinNsincerity]

I look forward to hearing what you think. Thank you so much for spending the time to read!

[Stan Lee]

Have I mentioned that I love your writing? ;) I really really LOVE your writing. It's so real. You have serious talent S.in.S!! I have 2 suggestions that you may feel free to ignore. I think you meant to say *cheques, and I think you meant to say *breasts.
Just amazing. Thanks for sharing. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, that means so much to me and keeps me writing!