Bloody Marry's

There is no because.

DC-IC is a part of the English speech.

Marvel -VS- DC.

I am marveled that I can finally see that there’s no plausible clause for this dependent cause.

An incomplete thought…?

It was given to me as a gift like Santa Claus, more like God.

Bow your head and take a pause with a head nod.

I love and accept all of me because God loves and accepts all of my flaws.

I admire your freedom of speech because you’ve escaped the lock jaws of being perfectly flawed.

This has now allowed us to be able to speak.

I’m being me by using my speech from the very moment I accepted it was time to lose me.

There’s no controlling me because I unleashed my inner beast.

The one that murdered my inner me, my ego is no more, the rain poured and rusted the leash.

The world was created in a week, that is seven days and it will be reborn again after the seven seals have been broken for we.

Some play for keeps, but I play to be free without paying fees.

I once prayed for your blood to regenerate my heart, the repercussions of a dead love when you played me.

You’ve broken me out of my grave and now you have become my prey.

Now I have a thirst for more blood and an obsession for no sleep.

Searching for a feast because I lost my first love and I’m not so sure I’ll ever find my best love.

I’m thirsty again, absorbing your sins that leak through your skin.

R.E.D. Is the color of my tears when they bleed.

Destiny is my best friend and my enemy.

The reason why I don’t have a living, just the treason of time and space that has me at a killing for believing that you were the one I was needing.

I am my equal, unleashing the angel and demon.

Author's Note

GodVamp

Reviews

[Stone Fox]

I feel like you have described the perfect example of a vampire in this. Not the Twilight or VDairies version but the Anne Rice version.

My favorite line has to be,

"Some play for keeps, but I play to be free without paying fees."

truly majestic.

-Stone

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for the comparison. I felt like a dead vamp when I wrote this. Still do most days...
I would love to hear why that line stood out to you if you don't mind telling?
-David.

[Emily]

Great idea for a poem!
Keep it up!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Emily!

[....................]

There are elements to this piece that are beyond my understanding to comment directly on them (I've never read a comic) but I do understand flow and rhythm, and I love the way your intensity courses through this poem... this would be great to listen to read aloud...well-penned...

[sinNsincerity]

hehe Well, I still do appreciate you taking the time to read it. Thank you!

[Ellay]

Really interesting poem :) Loved it!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad to hear that. Thank you!

[Ellay]

You're welcome :)

[wordman]

tenneese is the home of bloddy mary and green eyes
killed during the civil war a great write david

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you my friend!
And I didn't know that... =D

[wordman]

you`re welcome lot of ghosts here in the battle field,the bell witch is frm tenn too !

[jeannemarie coulter]

very thought provoking write...good for feed ing the mind...thank you

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I really appreciate it!

[EileenM]

Interesting. I'll have to think about this some more....

[sinNsincerity]

For sure, can't wait...

[Sultrysoul]

I have no words other than very deep

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ms. Sultry.

[Sultrysoul]

You are very welcome

[Carrie.]

This is such a good write. I adore the spoken word feel. Stream of consciousness. Good job.

(And thanks for the friend request)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you! Stream of conscious indeed...

[Jamestown]

This is so hard core that I don't even know where to begin!!!
This has so much greatness to it that my mind is flabbergasted,
this is a piece that should be done on an open mic,
so you can sit back and watch all the heads in the room spin!
Eminem would be impressed with this madness:)
Thanks for sharing your talent and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Hahah Thanks James, Youre the best!