Bloody Marry's

There is no because.

DC-IC is a part of the English speech.

Marvel -VS- DC.

I am marveled that I can finally see that there’s no plausible clause for this dependent cause.

An incomplete thought…?

It was given to me as a gift like Santa Claus, more like God.

Bow your head and take a pause with a head nod.

I love and accept all of me because God loves and accepts all of my flaws.

I admire your freedom of speech because you’ve escaped the lock jaws of being perfectly flawed.

This has now allowed us to be able to speak.

I’m being me by using my speech from the very moment I accepted it was time to lose me.

There’s no controlling me because I unleashed my inner beast.

The one that murdered my inner me, my ego is no more, the rain poured and rusted the leash.

The world was created in a week, that is seven days and it will be reborn again after the seven seals have been broken for we.

Some play for keeps, but I play to be free without paying fees.

I once prayed for your blood to regenerate my heart, the repercussions of a dead love when you played me.

You’ve broken me out of my grave and now you have become my prey.

Now I have a thirst for more blood and an obsession for no sleep.

Searching for a feast because I lost my first love and I’m not so sure I’ll ever find my best love.

I’m thirsty again, absorbing your sins that leak through your skin.

R.E.D. Is the color of my tears when they bleed.

Destiny is my best friend and my enemy.

The reason why I don’t have a living, just the treason of time and space that has me at a killing for believing that you were the one I was needing.

I am my equal, unleashing the angel and demon.

Author's Note

GodVamp

Reviews

[Stone Fox]

I feel like you have described the perfect example of a vampire in this. Not the Twilight or VDairies version but the Anne Rice version.

My favorite line has to be,

"Some play for keeps, but I play to be free without paying fees."

truly majestic.

-Stone

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for the comparison. I felt like a dead vamp when I wrote this. Still do most days...
I would love to hear why that line stood out to you if you don't mind telling?
-David.

[Bear]

Almost a rant soliloquy, so many references to so many different idealism's one could get confused between "God loves and accepts all of my flaws" to "I admire your freedom of speech because you’ve escaped the lock jaws of being perfectly flawed". I tell people all the time that I am perfect and I can prove it, I am the perfect me, if I improved any of my faults I would be someone else! So I agree that we should set ourselves free and except who we are, faults and all. Oh, to bad you couldn't have worked an Atlas Comics reference in there I was a fan way back when :~)

[sinNsincerity]

To sum it up, it's mainly about accepting the fact that I'm human and there's nothing wrong with what I do as long as I learn from life. There are other things hidden in here that I would only understand and maybe a small selected...
Thank you for reading Bear, I highly appreciate it!

[J. K. Hannah]

Wow, I really like your writing. I think you've got talent. I appreciate the rhyme, double meanings, and sincerity. I also appreciate that I'll need to read this at least 3 times through to feel like I've gotten out of it what it deserves. Sorry I can't give anything more specific now.. I actually do need to process it, you know?

[sinNsincerity]

Don't be sorry Hannah =D
There are so many levels and double meanings in what I say.
I actually don't expect anyone to understand, but when someone gets a hint of it...that makes the writing all worth it. I have a very complex mind which I am still trying to understand day by day, so when anyone does get a understanding it makes me smile and not feel so alone...
Thank you so much for spending the time to read more than once, I honestly and dearly appreciate that to the fullest!

[J. K. Hannah]

Totally understand

[B]

It is funny how man can turn into a hunter after having their heart broken ........
I believe a woman has to be so careful with a man's heart
Because the scar she leaves on him

So many woman after her end up paying the price
The hunter is cruel ......

[sinNsincerity]

You are totally right about a women being careful with a man's heart, but maybe it was a man before me who lead her on to treat me in such away which enabled the cycle. I then have learned that I don't need to be that guy no matter how shady women can be. I still have to do my part in being a great guy and remaining humble no matter what. Me saying that I was wrong to treat women badly just because I was treated so doesn't justify it. I had been an a*****e, but I've learned from it and everyone deserves better no matter what. And that's all I try to be...that piece of something better...

[Rana]

Quite remarkable how the drifts've been executed, some sort of a theme play, coupled by the rhythm being maintained by syllable pattern rather than plain rhyming. It turned a little creepy near the end, was totally effective. The allusion is apt. Some great shades of horror. 'Destiny is my best friend and my enemy'- a nice paradox, lifes a crazy ride. "the rain poured and rusted the leash."-i like how you put this, metaphors and all. A tale of transformation maybe, tragic. Certainly enjoyed it.

[sinNsincerity]

One can see it as tragic, but it is a paradox on the whole which led me to acceptance in who I am/ was... I'm really happy that you enjoyed it Rana! Thank you.

[marcus]

Interesting! I liked this !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Marcus, I'm glad you did!

[TheOne&Only]

Wow! This is such a beautifully dark, piece, I love the passion!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much hon!

[StimulateyourCreativity]

Had to read it a couple times ha really good work. Last few lines are amazing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you bro, yea it's one of those crazy ones...

[Kajal Sharma]

it sounded more like a rap in my head as i read it...but i really liked it..

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Kajal, I'm glad you did!

[Ishita Dixit]

The reason why I don’t have a living, just the treason of time and space that has me at a killing for believing that you were the one I was needing.
I am my equal, unleashing the angel and demon.

^awesome lines!
I could read them again and again all day!
You have let out all your grief and anguish so beautifully!
Great write!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ishita. Those lines mean so much to me, so I'm more than glad that you enjoyed them!

[Gee]

Right here we go,honesty,haven't got a clue as to what that was about or what to say.I work in construction because you don't have to be the brightest and your poem just reaffirmed that..sorry

[sinNsincerity]

No worries... If there's any part you would like me to beak down, I could do that for you.