Cosmic Romantics

I want to show you the stars.

Get you the sweetest chocolate from the planet Mars.

Have dinner with you on the moon.

Capture all of the gases from the entire universe and compose them into the most intoxicating and orgasmic fragrance perfume.

Enter the galactic.

Let’s wed on Venus __ I’ll give you all of Saturns rings.

Pick you the finest lilies off of Jupiter.

I want to show you the cosmos.

Fall into my arms and enter my heart like a black hole.

Let’s get lost in us.

Drifting, intertwining, and spiraling as the Milky Way.

Where are we going?

You and I weren't perfect creatures___ that’s why we ended up on earth,

But do know that I go beyond the five senses when I speak on your gorgeous features.

Reviews

[Rei Ta]

Wow!!! Love it!! Filled with love and passion expressed in the most sensational way. My mind just wonders off into a world of it's own when I read line by line. This is just wow..and if a world like that existed I want that intoxicating orgasmic fragrance perfume!!! lol

[sinNsincerity]

It exist in my mind hehe
It really makes me smile to hear that it did take you away while you were reading.
It means so much when I get some feed back such as yours.
Thank you Loretta!

[Rei Ta]

You're welcome! :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Well, that was a romantic ride of a lifetime! I hope to see the day when we can all experience that. Or at least through virtual means.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Nadia, I more than glad you enjoyed it.

[Jamestown]

This is cosmic blast of awesomeness!
I really enjoyed the metaphor use and the imagery
that follows this piece, you kept it throughout the
write which makes it consistent and fluent!
Your talent dwells with the stars my brother,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you James!

[Jamestown]

You are welcome! PTL:)