Untittled

You hit me like a rock to a windshield "

Shattered and scattered to never be seen through...

I'm one with the wind, so I'll remain as a traveling man 'till the day we meet again.

It kills to never be loved in the same way, so I place my sorrows within.

Is this part of God's plan?

I have shaky hands because I don't have an others to grasp.

Once again I'm left alone with the friend inside of my head.

I'm beyond going in ~~~~>

Open ends; rather that, a broken lens.

My hope is far from a belief.

And my heart is past half dead.

Leaning on a broken ledge to be place on the other side of the edge.

Your soul was mine to pledge, but it was also lost with the wind.

The end never met the beginning while in the blend.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Wow, this is deeply meaningful, personal as well as personal and beautifully expressed and felt.
It projects such deep emotions that touch you deep within on reading it. And its rawness of the soul and spirit that is broken by this love. And always will be held on a pedestal for this person and how he lost it. And will never forget his chance.

[nazia]

Ouch.. That's a painful piece. But the expression of pain is beautiful.. Its like you lost something that was yours in every way... Great job

[nazia]

I just wish u had a title for it

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Jamestown]

Another deep and emotional piece, I can always feel the
frustration of almost happy, then not. Like water slipping
through your fingers:( Thanks for sharing my talented brother
and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you brother, always good to hear what you think. God bless!