Untittled

You hit me like a rock to a windshield "

Shattered and scattered to never be seen through...

I'm one with the wind, so I'll remain as a traveling man 'till the day we meet again.

It kills to never be loved in the same way, so I place my sorrows within.

Is this part of God's plan?

I have shaky hands because I don't have an others to grasp.

Once again I'm left alone with the friend inside of my head.

I'm beyond going in ~~~~>

Open ends; rather that, a broken lens.

My hope is far from a belief.

And my heart is past half dead.

Leaning on a broken ledge to be place on the other side of the edge.

Your soul was mine to pledge, but it was also lost with the wind.

The end never met the beginning while in the blend.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Wow, this is deeply meaningful, personal as well as personal and beautifully expressed and felt.
It projects such deep emotions that touch you deep within on reading it. And its rawness of the soul and spirit that is broken by this love. And always will be held on a pedestal for this person and how he lost it. And will never forget his chance.

[erinwrites]

Really enjoyed this rather emotional read!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Erin, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[yvo miki]

That is a emotional poem!!!!!!!!😆😆😆

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading hon!

[yvo miki]

Your welcome hon

[AaronFreitas]

This is another awesome write buddy... some how I missed this one when you first posted. But another enjoyable piece my friend :) If you get a chance check out my new one it's something a little different for me :) Great work I always enjoy your work!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you man and don't worry about it.
Don't think I'm sleeping on your work man, this month has just been so wild for me and It was my cousin's wedding yesterday...

[Snow]

So deep. Its really nice. I love the part that goes:

"I'm one with the wind, so I'll remain as a traveling man 'till the day we meet again.
It kills to never be loved in the same way, so I place my sorrows within."

It is so relatable and understandable. Especially "It kills to never be loved in the same way, so I place my sorrows within." I feel like I've done this before and so I have so much sadness within me. Im a happy person but I have so much sorrow and sadness and just so much inside of me that it overtakes everything else.

This is an amazing piece. Very touching.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Snow! I love those lines as well and are a huge part of me, so it makes me really happy to hear you found a piece of you in my poem. Sadness is a killer and I can relate with you because overall I am a happy person and feel more than bless to complain about anything in life, but there are things (heartbreaks) that I have already admitted to myself that I will never overcome. The pain is and always be apart of me, but will not make me!
Thank you so much for reading!

[Rana]

The first two lines were exceptionally amazing and there are many beautiful lines that follow. You've described the kind of sorrow that's prevalent and in your pain many others shall find their own, I'm sure. "Once again I'm left alone with the friend inside of my head" --this was so much me. Brilliantly expressive piece.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm really happy that you saw a piece of you in here.
I'm also grateful for all you had to say.
Thank you Rana!

[B]

The end
I believe that is a choice always

So ..... If it is a choice

Melancholy should seldom be part of the equation
I would hope so

[sinNsincerity]

I would hope so as well!
Thank you so much for reading Nisreena!

[ANTO]

"I have shaky hands because I don't have an others to grasp.
Once again I'm left alone with the friend inside of my head." - I liked this very much Sin. deep and philosophical piece.
Thanks for sharing this one my friend.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm happy that you like those lines Anto. The shaky hands is quite literal and figurative, but that may change soon...=D
Thank you for reading Anto. It's always a pleasure!

[ANTO]

I understand my friend. Thank YOU !

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Very nice write. I enjoyed it. Ratin 100#

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[FateDictates]

wow this is so interesting..the honesty and instant visual impact it creates..well done..curtsy bow

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for the bow.
And sorry for responding so late, this one got past me.

[FateDictates]

curtsy curtsy..