Your Ways of Inertia

My poetry is what makes me happy;

but if I were happy, I wouldn't need the poetry to be.

I see your hearts breaking without opening your chest,

so I rest underneath to catch the tears

because that's what you'll express when you have nothing left.

To look inside and say you feel numb,

but numb is still one greater than none.

The older I get my heart feels young;

the flesh is none without my soul

and my soul is none without one.

My mind spewing out like a hot gun

because love is all I want!

Spirit resurrecting without passing the sun.

Then God’s son came down to allow my body more than one love.

Unconditional love was injected into my blood.

Sacrificed the vices for the nicest love from above.

Some say f**k love

because their love has been fucked!

Lightning struck and I reached out my hand to pick you up.

And if you didn't need my help,

you could always find me without yelp.

You got yourself,

but know I got yourself just as well.

Wishing on a well and not a star because what goes up must come down.

Your ways of inertia.

Your steady inconsistency took the best of me…

And that’s okay.

Out of control when you try to grasps the things

You cannot control

Because you have never held a hold.

Reviews

[Asante]

Wow, brother. This was really something that hit me on a deep-rooted, personal note. Speaking to some of my yesterdays with this one.
J.Cole said "don't save her, she don't wanna be saved.." and in relation to this, it can fit right in seamlessly.
Some have been broken beyond knowing how to really receive love, even as the love is genuine. It comes as a defense mechanism against their own yesterdays.
Great write of yours, bro. Even if I'm late to the dance.

[sinNsincerity]

Love J. Cole and his Friday Night Light. Totally forgot to add dude to our list haha
And I think that is where I'm stuck stuck, I no longer know how to receive it, so I just give it out 'till someone else takes it.I have one lady I've been hot and cold with for seven years now, but the timing is never on point. It's just not as simple as it used to be. We're all fucked up lol

[Celie Rose]

Loved it The expression and emotions are deep. "Unconditional love was injected into my blood." Well written. Keep writing!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Celie!

[Tag_YoureDead]

I love the depth of this. It could move legions of men with its emotions. It has a lot of different meanings hidden within it. I look forward to reading more, your work is really good and I love it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, you're too sweet! That would be great, but all I want to do is move hearts.
I'm so glad that you loved it. That means the world to me.
T.C.C.I.C

[Tag_YoureDead]

It's no problem, really. Your work is definitely worth reading.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I want to hug you!

[Tag_YoureDead]

^^ I'm glad I made you happy

[Bear]

Critique: (you could always find me without yelp) a yelp
(but know I got yourself just as well) got you just

Review: It is always interesting to learn the different views of people and religion is the most complicated making it controversial. Semantics being the culprit, if you look closely at the feelings the words are expressing you would see the similarities. And I have to tell you I am in love with this line (Wishing on a well and not a star because what goes up must come down) brilliant line :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm really stoked because that is one of my faves as well and feel it's the glue to this peice.
read moreI'm really stoked because that is one of my faves as well and feel it's the glue to this peice.
Always appreciated. Thank you!

[wordman]

you are covering a lot of emotions and you did it well my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sir, I do my best to convey my emotions to the best of my understanding and I'm more than glad you enjoyed it my friend!

[Southern_Writes]

Wow, I really liked the depth and complexity of this and how at the same time is was simple as well, that is quiet hard to achieve. Loved the inner content, the struggles of humanity. Well done my friend and Thank you for the RR I haven't received one from you in ages!

[sinNsincerity]

It has been ages right!? I've been blahhh and not feeling like myself as of late. I just need to replenish the desire and uncover some new inspiration within.
I'm so glad you liked it Kansas. I'm forever grateful!
You and your family have a blessed day!

[Southern_Writes]

You are most welcome! I have some new stuff, maybe it will give you some inspiration! God bless you friend.

[sakshi arora]

the beginning is a great kick start i like this piece's captivating feel but i think the last stanza can be more expressive . nice work :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sakshi for reading!

[Charlee Richards]

I love this poem! Maybe replace your adjectives with richer vocabulary though, I think it would help with your imagery.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Charlee. I will see what I can do...

[Charlee Richards]

Thesauruses are my best friend lol

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome work I really enjoyed reading this piece. I can definitely relate to it and loved the thoughts you poured into this piece. Good job!

[Jamestown]

Thank you Andrew, I highly appreciate what you have to say and think. I'm glad that you can relate because that is my only wish.
I'm a friend of Jamestown and I would like to add you as a friend on here and vise versa?

[AaronFreitas]

Definitely!

[andrew mitchell]

poetry does make you happy even happier when its a good write with flow and deep thoughts . great work

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Andrew for taking the time to read my work and I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[gorillarock]

JT giving you some publicity :D well deserved! I'm glad to have checked out this RR, every line has so much interest drawing me in. The piece as a whole is fantastic! I was hooked at "My poetry is what makes me happy, but if I were happy I wouldn't need the poetry to be."

[sinNsincerity]

Oh wow , thank you so much! That means so much to me and I'm more than glad you enjoyed it!