Red

Confusion
stumbles along
unwelcome.
My heart skips
twisting suddenly.
My stomach growls
A caged beast within
Stirring storms
And leaving me red.
Impulsive
My touch becomes
destructive
My voice a boom
of thunder.
My chest heaves
Like waves
crashing against
the cliff side.
Intense winds
attempting to
calm the storm.
I am left with shame
a dew upon my shoulders
An ever present regret
An ever present reminder.
My throat tightens
the last of the rain
forming in my eyes.
I wish to forget you

I will never forget you.

Reviews

[L. Fenella]

Heartbreakingly beautiful

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you so much.

[Latifa]

nicely penned my friend.I enjoyed it

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you.

[Michael Phillips]

I have to honestly say this is a great poem man! Nice job! The last four lines are killer

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This a cute poem, very creative. Nicely penned.

Kaze~ :-)

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[yuki]

Cute little story I can tell there is anger nicely done

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you.

[Bluefire]

Rage, and then regret. Something beautiful, torn to pieces, and then you wish with all your heart that you could put it back together again.
Well penned. ^^

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you :)

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^