That Echo

That Echo

Resounding pain echoes

Bouncing off the sound of each tear

Each tear slowly becomes apart of the puddle of sorrow

Laying at thy feet

Which hurtfully flows from the heart

Resonating upon bits and pieces of irrationalities

Wanting so eagerly to hang onto logic

Stuck on reason paralyzed by a self hatred

That angrily eats at the surface

Resting on the ripples

Fighting the tide there in the center of the soul

Yet the mind falls backwards

Through the door of understanding

Going over the writing on the walls there in the soul

Pacing back and forth

Only to find ones self stuck with thine own reflection

♡SingPoetically♡

♥Melissa. YaQeen♥

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Excellent. ....:)........

[SingPoetically]

I appreciate your words Sami Smiles

[Sami Khalil]

"That angrily eats at the surface
Resting on the ripples
Fighting the tide there in the center of the soul
Yet the mind falls backwards
Through the door of understanding"

We do need those doors of understanding. A splendid poem...:)......................

[SingPoetically]

Ty vrry much smiles

[Jack Wolfe]

Be careful with double repetition in verses 'Each tear, each tear'.

A poetic introspection of the human soul, a reflection of ones being, 'Going over the writing on the walls,' nice line, "Why do they read?" Is the interpretation the one of self diagnoses warranted. you paint a vivid picture of pain and honesty.