A Lonely Soul

A Lonely Soul

  Perched upon lonelyHigh on a hill

Surrounded by nothingness        

Weeping

With drops of sorrow dripping through the veins

Bleeding self blame

Drifting in and out of consciousness

Dying alone as the last breaths slowly go heading

into shallooooooooooooow

Engulfing the emptiness

Fighting to not drift into unknowing

Scared standing on the mind cliff looking out to no where

No signs of any other life

As the heart starts to feel cold

Darkness becoming bigger almost blinding

Thoughts of wanting to live but not feel the pain

So it feels right to drift towards the darkness

Warm and weak light as a feather

Ramblings of insanity running through like memories

Feeling crazy the closer I get to the light gone dark

Thinking briefly will the world care that it has lost another soul

Dying all alone

♡SingPoetically♡

♥Melissa. YaQeen♥

Reviews

[SingPoetically]

Smiles thank you Benita very very much Im glad you enjoyed the poem

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Sadly we all know how this feels when
life seems crazy and all there is pain
and someone we think loves us but shows
the opposite of love it is like a dark cloud Engulfing you
but you don't let it Engulf you like a dark abyss
and don't allow it to come in or any closer.


Very inspiring I don't usually read many dark poems
but this wasn't extremely dark it had some light to it.



I loved these Stanza's lines here


Perched upon lonely High on a hill

Surrounded by nothingness

Weeping

With drops of sorrow dripping through the veins

Bleeding self blame

Drifting in and out of consciousness

Dying alone as the last breaths slowly go heading

into shallooooooooooooow

Engulfing the emptiness



I hope the Emptiness doesn't Engulf you :)
this was a Great write nice work Bravo!


Blessings. Benita

[SingPoetically]

Smiles ty Sindu very much

[Sindu]

Ramblings of insanity running through like memories
Feeling crazy the closer I get to the light gone dark

An intresting read. It's like watching through the persons eyes as they go through the pain, creeping its way in slowly.

[SingPoetically]

Thank you Sami I appreciate your words very much smiles

[Sami Khalil]

Purched(perche) upon lonelyHigh on a hill

Surrounded by nothingness

Weeping"

A splendid read and write. Thank you for sharing...:).....................