Salted Caramel lips and Calender dreams

I know 

I believe

there's a day marked 

in my bright calendar

fluttering in dawning breeze

twined in summer heat

I hope 

I dream

Of you, with me swaying along

twinkling laughter in your eyes

telling stories and captivating me

promising me promises I wish to see

I love 

I feel

all melting care you shower

your fingers tracing little maps

those salted caramel lips mesmerizing me

whispering into morrows as todays flee.  

Author's Note

Genre I rarely write in
Heart thumping as I type
Posting before I change my mind
Now enjoy this din

* hides behind something hide-able*

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Very steamy, sensual write, but still sweet and romantic.

[Sindu]

Thank you. that's about all of it.

[MomzillaNC]

yvw :D

[sereenaoutloud]

This is a beautiful write girlie.so very romantic and sweet!
Your Authors notes made me laugh...you are too funny! You have not need to hide, you are a very talented writer and this is proof of that!!
Love it! :)

[Sindu]

=) Thank you so much for loving it and laughing too.. :)

[Avinash]

Summer is rising temperature. Loved the analogy and morphology.

[Sindu]

Yes, it is :D Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poetry wonderful and sweet.
"I love
I feel
all melting care you shower
your fingers tracing little maps
those salted caramel lips mesmerizing me
whispering into morrows as todays flee. "
The above lines could stand alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry for love.
Coyote

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Coyote. Yes, you are right.. they can. I did not see that :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoy your work.

[Sindu]

I enjoy yours too.

[jb]

Nice romantic poem indeed!.....good job

[Sindu]

Thank you :D

[jb]

Your so welcome!

[Mayank]

Haha! Good write, I didn't expect such piece from you, but the romance tinkles and that is visible.

[Sindu]

I like to surprise ;) Thank ya..

[T.S. Claus]

Pretty good if you usually don't write! Nice job!

[Sindu]

Thank you Claus. I get all shy and embarrassed so I never ( almost) wrote this kind.

[T.S. Claus]

Don't be! Everyone is creative and great in their own way. Besides, no one knows you on here! Haha I made this because I am more shy and embarrassed when it's a friend or someone in my family.

[Sindu]

I agree. It's just that this is relatively new and different thing to what i write.. But that gives a sense of privacy. I don't need my cousins discussing it in parties or family gatherings, haha.

[ManasaC]

this is nice...a fresh one...i enjoyed it!!

[Sindu]

Thank you Manasa :) trying my hand at it

[AaronFreitas]

I like this write Sindu... it's always good to step out of your comfort zone and try something new to keep those creative juices flowing. Good work :)

[Sindu]

Yes, comfort zone kills. So, I stepped out with a great difficulty and trying not running back like my pants are on fire. Thank you Aaron :)

[R Smith]

you should write this genre' more Sindu, you are clearly very good at it, this an excellent poem, exudes quality and poetic right to its heart, well done :)

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Richard for such overwhelming response. I am still trying to not be embarrassed about it :P