Emotions

Emotions

 

These creepers instilled in mind

 

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as sanity's pill

 

conquer the being, sublime

 

c r a c k..

 

to surface

 at peril.

 

Reviews

[mou]

very tough to deal with emotion which acts just like our own enemy sometimes..
beautiful

[Saddam]

Just a wonderful write here on emotions.
Love it.

[Mayank]

Creepy, dark, emotive, I need pill as well.

[Pryde Foltz]

Never fight your emotions … then they become stronger …:) A great visual and emotive piece.

[R Smith]

those emotions are driving you to intriguing writing Sindu, a most unusual and deeply aware write, very well done :)

[Sindu]

Haha I took a standpoint away from myself to see what buggers yhese creepers are and how mich effect one :) thank you Richard:)

[~]

Sometimes I am not sure if that mind of yours ever rests :) an intriguing write. I am still gathering insight about you, and will PM you soon with some good insight :)

[Sindu]

My mind takes it on itself to work like a bee in a hive whether I'm asleep or awake:) thanks, moon. No rush at all

[Jamestown]

Metaphor use is really good!
Clinging to sanity's pill makes me smile
almost serves as a oxymoron:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Sindu]

Thanks James. Aren't oxymorons the best? :)
Remember, I commented on your poem emotions that I have something opposite on the same topic?

[Jamestown]

I do remember my friend and glad I was able to read
and enjoy, love the creativity in this, thanks again:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
perfect definition!!!
perfect metaphors.....
awesome!!!
i loved it!!!!
:)

[Sindu]

Thank you :)
But seriously critic -_-

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yes seriously awesome!!! :) :)