My tainted proposal

Black valentine challenge

My story: 

His dreaming lids covered

by wisps of darkened hair,

lips slightly apart, a breath in,

All I could do was stare. 

Reminisce of way he moves,

a casual lean on a door

to cuddling as a moulded mess,

enough to curve my lips a bit more.

I vowed to never let go

his demons and mistakes, as well

affair with her, that girl

I took it as a parcel.

As he stared dazed, awake

tied up, questioning his delirious state;

sharp metal clutched in my hand

I promised that it's his designed fate.

Panic building, begging begins

as he tugs and turns to explain,

too focused on the blood trail

I poured my love into his pain.

Cuts and gashes enamoured him

as I dug his heart from cavity

burning with passionate love 

pecked his lips with severity. 

His own fault, all this love.

I moved away heart held in hand

a glint stopped my mesmerizing, 

tiny rock dropped from his pants.

My breath hitched while mind

cleared his jeweller girl 'affair'

his heart clutched to mine

all I could do was stare..  

My present:

His ring adorns my hand

enveloped by love, unrestrained;

greeting me day and night

his heart lies pickled by my bed.  

Author's Note

After a block of nearly two months, this was what I came up with ( least cringe-able)

Reviews

[R Smith]

Sindu you are the queen of horror, this can rival King in just sheer terror and pain, the poor guy only wanted to love and marry you, you gave him a heartless reply, must have been some block it made you really mad it seems but this dark humour and poetry is a good reply to any block, love it well done :)

[Sindu]

That's definitely not heartless.. It just resulted in him ending heartless. Haha
It's ok Richard, there is always a second time ;) thank you.
Yup block madness it is and the inspiration from the challenge :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

Woah! You are one dangerous lady! Haha, JK. The poem is great. A girl's anger owing it's birth to the infidelity of the partner. Very captivating and dramatic. :D

[Sindu]

Hey!Thanks a lot :D But the infidelity did not occur :P

[Steph]

This was such a dramatic piece! You are really talented at how you conveyed the twist there right in the end. I loved it and I would love to read some more of your work :)

[Sindu]

Wow, Steph! Thanks a lot :) Sorry for the late reply, I think It didn't go through last time..

[AlexValkyrie]

Totally caught me off guard with the murder. Nice.

All joking aside that was pretty well written. I'll be paying close attention to the things you post.

[Sindu]

Sure thing. I'll pay a close attention to what you can say, then. Thanks Alex!

[Haley Wilson]

I'd say you killed your writers block with this one! Fantastic storytelling, and I just adore the creepy vibe it gives off.

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Haley. Yeah! I creeped the block away :D it's amazing that you like the vibe here, I wanted it to seep through.

[Vishuddha]

A poem of jealousy and the black rage of woman motivated by love turned to the darkest hate. Revenge is not good for the soul. Great strength is required for forgiveness. Without it all happiness is gone.

[Sindu]

Lots of strength is required, not just for forgiveness but also to look through the cloud of anger. May be yoga would help. :)

[Sindu]

Thanks for the review, by the way.

[Vishuddha]

Thanks for the poem

[Pushkar Prabhat]

heyy bhagwaan!!
i should be scared of you............
brilliant poem by the way.......cold scary and bloody.
i loved it!!!
:)

[Sindu]

I like to leave an impression behind. So, be scared!! Thanks nese :D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hmmm!!!!!!!!!!!! "impression" hmmmm!!!!!
you are welcome!!!

[Thayle L.]

The things a woman would do for love

[Sindu]

Always surprising..

[Ichi Shin]

( ''_' ) (●~●) ( _-_)
('~0~) RUN FOR YER LIVES... ABANDON THE SHIP...
Bakemono......

[Sindu]

Too late... (-_-)// (-_-)

[Ichi Shin]

Jack_the _ripper... okay. Nothin to do here.

[Mayank]

Are you alright, my dear ma'am? I always thought people come up with s****y stuff after block. Here, this is such a psycho-finesse poem. Loved it.

[Sindu]

Now that's there, I'm very much fine :) I guess the block is powerful enough to get the psycho side out and that's calming. Lol.. I sound scary

[Avinash]

Quite a revenge I will say. Now I am scared of you :) lol

[Sindu]

It's kinda spontaneous plan I guess. Don't worry, it's an occasional side haha ;)