Laughable Life!

flip side of the coin..

A monstrous melody

This tragic threnody

A perfect parody

And minute malady

With tornado twists 

Tiny bags of bliss

From merry musketeers

Inured: grueling games

Laughable life indeed!

Reviews

[Happy hours]

short but adorable....different shades of life.......nice writing...well done :)

[Sindu]

Thanks Anshul for a sweet review :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Life is to live,, I like the way you expressed these thoughts,,
an enjoyable read

[Sindu]

Yep.. Let's live:) thank you Hardeep..

[KWP]

Embrace life and all that is in it ! YES ! Simple Rhythmic (well at least until the 6th line) all encompassing ... a quaint reminder to sit back and enjoy the ride, cos there's not getting off - well not yet anyway ...

nice one x

[Sindu]

Thanks you so much! yup, take it and make it as we get it :)

[Rene Salinas]

This shouts at me Dharmacakra which is the representation of the many paths to be taken as every line represent a possible path. It is also inviting as after every line imagination runs and I found myself creating my own story line. What to me is the most refreshing part is the fact that carrying all that weight can be disheartening yet humour comes to loosen things up to dissipate all sensse of false importance.

Let's laugh it up then

A drink to follow even

Cheers.

Thankyou

[Sindu]

Dharmachakra is a very high comparison for this Rene, I think :)
After all, when a situation gets too serious it seems unbelievable which becomes a cause for humor. Care to share the story lines?
Thanks a lot Rene.

[Rene Salinas]

I would but it is your page I tend to see things internally sorry! Great stuff thought Sindu!

[Sindu]

Ok.. sure.. thanks though

[R Smith]

very interesting Sindu, 2 opposing stanza's of life's changeable factor's that cause you to call them laughable, as is most of things in this life, well said Sindu, bravo :)

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Richard! From a relative stance, life does seem so right!

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Very unique vision of looking at life. very admirable. great piece of work maam

[Sindu]

Thanks Nitesh :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

interesting unique take on life..............
short compact and complete!!!!
laughable; life indeed!!!
i loved it!!!!
:)

[Sindu]

yup.. laughable :) Thank you ..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)