Laughable Life!

Laughable Life!

A Poem by Sindu
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flip side of the coin..

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A monstrous melody
This tragic threnody
A perfect parody
And minute malady
With tornado twists 
Tiny bags of bliss
From merry musketeers
Inured: grueling games

Laughable life indeed!

© 2014 Sindu


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This one is Laaaajawaaab.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing write here dear............ Fantastic formation. Love this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot SSADD!
Fantastic wordplay.. :P.. Small, yet meaningful.. "Laughable life indeed!" - It all depends on how you take it.. :P..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Yes it is! Definitely how ever one takes it.
The words can create a diff picture for every on.. read more
TheLostMind

10 Years Ago

Different people can create different pictures (for themselves) from the same set of words :P.. And .. read more
great selection of words.
good rhyming scheme.
keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jamsheed :)
brilliant use of words. very descriptive and satisfying, good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Surya :)
Playful and alliterative way to speak of the confusion that is Life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Thanks Momzi! At point, everything seems amusing
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

YVW. You know you've made it through and overcome it when you can look back and laugh!
Sindu

10 Years Ago

Definitely. Seems overwhelming but great to see it's done and dealt with.
Wonderful selection of words Sindu, it's short but it seems, whole life is covered in just 9 lines...
great work...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sanjh! I was surprised it worked out
Technically, it's crafted beautifully. There are two images and both are brilliantly presented.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mayank

10 Years Ago

I recently read a poetry of a very famous Indian poet, in fact the name of his poetry was Two Images.. read more
Sindu

10 Years Ago

Wow that's nice. Message me the name?
Mayank

10 Years Ago

I will check and let you know.
Tides are unpredictable especially those happening inside mind. An intelligent write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Thanks Avinash. Everything seems more than it it when seen from a relative point. :)
fun word play throughout!.. this makes you think without knowing it.. nicely done ma'am.. you know I love the alliteration :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sindu

10 Years Ago

Thanks April. I did think about you when I wrote it ;) :P haha.
That's great to know this can.. read more

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