Panic Manic

Eyes wide, all encompassing

lips part, harsh gasps in

pulse retaliates, enraged

lungs mutilated, suffocated

           

Heart laughs, maniacal mad

Thumping ruthless, straining the cage

mad rhythm,

cunning control

Mind dazed, images fleeting

narrowed on pain, clearly!

 

Regret prowling, fear flowing

fingers numb, sides clasping

digging into the back

Survival comfort

 

sobs wrecking, worsen with time

sockets soaked, ducts deluded

cuddling, convulsing

heart kick-starts

tiny ball of life

wishing another last chance

 

Whimpering,

Whispering

 

'No, no, NO, not AGAIN!

 

Praying,

Pleading

 

'Please end...'

 

 

 

Volatile entity

Weakened, worn-out

Crawling within

Leeches on nothingness

Waking the incomplete..

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

its certainly manic, in its concept its a beautiful construction of words, love the leeches and the sockets soaked, ducts deluded, it may be a plea for sanity but its like heaven on words to me, thank you Sindu :)

[Sindu]

Wow Richard! Thank you so much. I love those too :)

[Happy hours]

I love the way you structured your poem with the powerful worlds....keep it up...amazingly penned :)

[Sindu]

You meant words? Thanks a lot Anshul :)

[Happy hours]

oh sorry typing error... :P

[Sindu]

Yep haha! Seemed rather worldly :P

[KWP]

Crawling within leaches on nothingness - - walking the incomplete - - oh man what a visual.

I like the way your mind works chick! You have an excellent command of the English language. The format works here - erratic and spasmodic, a mind in mayhem no less.

Well done xx

[Sindu]

Thanks a ton beth! :D That's a very high compliment.
yup a mayhem within.. worse when it's true

[KWP]

Beth -- hehe xx

[Sindu]

wahhhht! Pretty name but long :P Ok?

[Sindu]

I thought about Elis, Eli, Elisa, Lisa, Lis, Isabeth, beth