Venture Vibe!

Time to jump...

Let's be a little,

little less concrete.

Put away those cages

made of watches and badges.

Here we go!

Step up! wear your goggles,

dust those feathers, gray and blue.

Get a head start, run with the wind,

jump off the cliff, right at the end.

Woohoo!!

Dive into the waters, deep through;

flap with the fishy school,

fight those snarling sharks, heed;

try not be an eight-hand's meal!

That's close.. phew..

 

Rise up a castle

from sands and shells;

fly your flag beckoning 

the crab and crew! 

Over here!!

Ride away the prized stallion

right under the king's nose;

galloping with wind in your hair,

squires behind you to scare!

yee-haw!

Roll down a grassy green hill,

sniff those blooming flowers too.

Reds, yellows, oranges and blues,

too much pollen, ACHOO!

Oops..

Visit a country fair,

dressed up like a jewel.

Taste all those pies and tarts,

dance away to those catchy tunes..

Finally...

Lie underneath the starry sky,

make a wish, may be two;before 

you step in cubicles and cabins,

recall, the venture deep within..

Author's Note

Imagine switching between the scenes like a good Disney song :)

Reviews

[Saddam]

An intelligent and interesting piece.
I like it very much dear.

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot ssadd! Glad you liked it

[ManasaC]

Adrenaline Vibe.... Fresh poem ..You kind of ventured into mind of a 9-5 person with this "venture Vibe"
i enjoyed it thoroughly...

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot Manasa! Yup, busy bodies all need a dose of happiness :) very happy that you enjoyed it so much..

[Mayank]

An intellectual piece this is, one of the best I have read so far....

[Sindu]

Wow! Thanks a bunch Mayank!

[Avinash]

There is an innocent energy in this beautiful work in this Sindu. I enjoyed reading it.

[Sindu]

Glad you enjoyed it :) everyone needs a dose of innocent energy, right! Thank you :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

A nice read, I liked its tone and mood,
well done,
thankyou

[Sindu]

Thank you Hardeep!

[jennifer little]

nice write keep up the good work

[Sindu]

Thank you..

[R Smith]

reminds me of being on holiday when a child, lots of things we'd do that's so different from today, thank you Sindu :)

[Sindu]

Thank you Richard for sharing :) and nice to know it touched your memories :)

[AprilRN1210]

the imagery and childlike animated tone made this an absolute JOY to read!... I was so engrossed in the scenery and emotion that I didn't pay attention to rhyming and flow.. I was lost.. enchanted.. this one is so much FUN!.. have to say one of my favorites of yours.. Awesome job!... and yes.. you gave Disney a run for their money.. really enjoyed! *smiling big*

[Sindu]

oh WOW!! now I'm smiling big and bright :D Thanks a lot APril. You're awesome like that! That's all what I wanted the reader to feel so.... YaYY

[AprilRN1210]

yes ma'am, you did an awesome job!.. smile away!!!.. you are more than welcome.. it was MY pleasure..

[Sindu]

Aye aye Miss! ;)

[Surya pradha]

very well framed. liked the format and the way in which you have displayed it as well. enjoyed it!

[Sindu]

Thanks Surya! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[ayesha gupta]

i enjoyed it. it was awesome, sindu.
you seem sporty person..jumping off the cliff..its a really new thing for me to imagine too. lol.

[Sindu]

Hey Ayesha! Thanks a lot! Haha, I have crazy imagination, that's all but I suck at sports :P
Oh I never tried jumping off a cliff either. Yet. ;)