Brambles filled pathway!

Ambled stupor

Deep rutted path

Barbless ruffled feathers

Ambage doubled

Withering limbs, tired

Disdain dripping

Crushed croquettes of mind

Age of merciless materialists.

Lamp of hope flickering

Eyes steeled from suffering

Every step, a measure forward.

Broken bones mend,

Reconciling with the past

Elements concord for truth

Fighters fight, never flail

Time and now creators regale!

Reviews

[Jamie]

A really beautiful piece of work! Great job!

[Rene Salinas]

It is an enchanting writing this one! Not just because of the sequence which is more than invtiing but also the use of lanaguage which instantly elevates the writing to a moment of admiration. Introspective moments are far a few and we we do delve insisde of us an a moment of conducive silence helps us to gather experiences we can come in contact with a moment of recognition and hopefully learn something which will enoble our lives. Not an easy thing to do! As the writings puts it we have to fight for clarity, and make the truth reveal itself.

Great invogorating words here.

Thankyou

[Sindu]

Thank you so much Rene! Feels good to have a review from you. Even few seconds taken to consider the path, it will change everything. Thanks again

[Rene Salinas]

Oh Sindu thankyou you this is a very elgant way of writing. I for once appreciate that....

[Sindu]

Splendid! Thanks again

[Sindu]

Really great to have that :)

[KWP]

wow - you sure can write - I am impressed :) Love it ... all of it xx

[Sindu]

Thank you so much :) haha.. yeah, I try ;)

[Pryde Foltz]

Superb word play, Sindu … full of meaning and whimsy and not a drop of flab. Loved it.

[Sindu]

Thank you so much Pyrde! Glad you loved it :)
Good enough like your readings.. The word okay? ;)

[Sindu]

The word play**

[Surya pradha]

spectacular descriptions, good vocab too. a really good poem all in all. keep up the good work!

[Sindu]

Thanks a lot sanjh!!

[Surya pradha]

i'm not sanjh, but you're welcome!

[Sindu]

oh dear I meant thanks Surya.. Sorry must have been halp asleep hehe

[Surya pradha]

that's okay!

[Sindu]

Okay phew.. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow! such rich poem and a delight to read!
amazing imagery!
i loved it!!! Bravo!!!
Beautiful!
:)

[Sindu]

Thank you Pushkar! Feel honored by that review!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome and don't be formal.....truth be told: i envy you.......i wish i could create such imagery.

[Sindu]

That is surprising. I should say that to you. I really like your works.. better than the previous ones

[Pushkar Prabhat]

if you say so. i try!

[Sindu]

yup! thanks :)