Lost my remote control

It shocks me, how 

my eyes roam searching for you!

Without my own accord.

How I catch my self

drifting away, pondering about you.

It's unnerving , how 

you infuriate me with your quips,

tease, till I lose any shred of calm.

All the while looking so smug,

well- aware of what you do.

You stupefy me, when 

you remember my little obsessions,

my moods, my ways;

say the right thing,

make me laugh till I'm in tears.

As you look my way

Wink and flash your trademark smile,

I wish I can scram

just so you can't catch 

the way my cheeks flame.

I wonder when I lost all

all my semblance of before?

Then it hits me like a way on a shore,

that I'm not in my control

not anymore...

Author's Note

This is the first time I tried something of this genre. Help with grammer and puntuations, please.

Reviews

[Avinash]

Sometimes you have to lose all your controls to find yourself. Innovative writing.

[Sindu]

True, Avinash! Thank you :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awwwww.........
beautiful poem.....!!!
very well written.....
i hope you find your remote soon!!!
some spelling mistakes might be there......
i loved it Mam!!!
:)

[Sindu]

Thanks bud :) yup, a load of typos in their.. I'll get them. My remote's fine cos the controller seems be away on work through time portal :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

waah!!! kamaal ki baat hai!!!

[Sindu]

There* -_-

[Roshan Nair]

THis is something very fun and interesting, very unlike the usual poetic themes. And you've done a great job with it, I like the structure and rhymes used :) the pain of losing a remote control, something so universally relate-able . great write again. cheers

[Sindu]

Haha though it irks to lose the remote control, one cannot deny the fun and change it brings however she may deny to acknowledge it ;) thanks Roshan :) it's like a burst of joy and I wrote it :P