Lies

They live in our soul,

as they subconsciously ruin,

every bit of your soul.

They eat you away,

and hold you back from all,

that is true.  

Reviews

[[KL]]

A good write.. But I think it could be better if you added more, I think this is a bit too short to really make the reader feel anything, if you get what I mean? It's a bit of an anti-climax.. However, that doesn't take away from the quality of your work (:
[M]