Your touch

Your touch,

weakens my soul.

Your eyes,

make me wonder whats next.

Your thoughts,

make my mind make other thoughts.

AS your hugs,

make someones heart of stone,

Softer.

Reviews

[Dream Catcher]

This was pretty good, I think you could've made it a bit longer but it's completely fine as for where it is at [: Keep up the writing!

[~ Otto Girl ~]

this is so true. i can comprihend to this. very nice peom.

[Zana]

i lyk thiz one.....gud job joy

[[KL]]

Nice.. Very sweet indeed. Easy on the brain too, as it's short and straight to the point.. I like it (:
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[zappy]

yea this is a really good poem

[clauds294]

This is a very sweet poem! :)