Attack

Attack

A Poem by Joy Lynn B.

I look into your,
dark evil eyes,
that stare into my soul,
you reach out of the ground,
to pull your self out,
of the deep,
cold ground,
as I see your corpse,
coming out,
I start to shutter,
as I see the rest of you come out,
I start to run away,
but trip on a stump,
then suddenly the corpse,
starts crawling closer,
and closer to my leg,
and grabs a hold,
I try to brake the clutch,
of his hand,
but it was no use,
I knew there was nothing else I could do,
so I lay there and waited for the right moment,
when finally I got out of his clutches,
and got to my home,
of safety and warmth.

© 2010 Joy Lynn B.


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This works as prose as well as poetry, thats great:)
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I feel as if this is a story more than a poem. The end is a bit confusing. Did she/he get home already or is she/he still in the corse's clutch's? and is "I" a girl or boy? sorry so many questions. In a way it is good because now you know this poem has driven thought into my head :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Joy Lynn B.
Joy Lynn B.

Somewhere, FL, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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So, ya my name is already given, if you haven't read it then it's Joy Lynn B.! I love writing poetry and writing songs for me to sing! To bad for me I have to buy music to go with it..... so that make.. more..

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