Darkness

All I can see is the moon,

the rest is very vague,

I try to look harder,

but I still see nothing.

 

I hear whispers in the wind,

that are telling me,

to turn around,

but I continue going.

 

I feel something breathing on my shoulder,

but when I go to look back,

it stops,

the darkness is over bearing.

 

I feel his presence,

as he stares into my soul,

he takes oevr my heart,

that's just how it goes.

 

The worst part of all is how it ends,

I'm here now,

but what happened,

to the rest?

 

Reviews

[Zana]

whoooooo

[clauds294]

This is an amazing write! The mystery really lures me in. and I love how your inspiration came from the moon!

[Joy Lynn B.]

Well I got bored and I looked outside and it was a full moon and there is a lot of hate going around my school right now, so I just wrote and didn't think.

[[KL]]

a good piece.. the ideas conveyed are very mysterious and intriguing.. am wanting to know how the idea for this arose? a good piece all the same though (: