You're the reason.....

You're the reason I wake up,

and make sure no ones around the corner.

 

You're the reason I'm afraid,

of going to a diffrent place.

 

You're the reason when someone asks whats wrong,

I run away and cry alone.

 

You're the reason my life is upside down,

without a reason in the world to live anyway.

 

You're the reason,

there are no tears in my eyes,

cause you made me cry to much already.

Reviews

[~ Otto Girl ~]

very nice peom girly.

[clauds294]

This relates to the other poem, You Stand There. This poem gives me chills and makes my heart sink deep though. There's something about the way it was all tied together. Amazing job, I love poems that reach deep down and get the fears of each person out. I hope and pray you are simply writing off of thought and not experience. If in deed it is experience I pray you are well.

[[KL]]

Ooh, a hint of confrontation within this maybe? I honestly don't know how you manage to write like this.. Without experiencing what you write about first.. It's truly remarkable :L Unless of course.. You did experience something similar to this at one point..? Hmm, it get's one thinking for sure. :L Great write though, very well done. Very good use of emotions within this, as well as the use of blank verse, once again (: Good work, well done =D
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[Zana]

awwwww i lyk thiz one