A random poem

Wake up to the other life,

to see the spirits who have came,

Sit up from the shallow water,

to breathe air that's over bearing,

Love that is alive,

even though you are dead,

Do we close our eyes,

when we see the answer in front of us,

Do we hit the one,

who has been hurt,

Do we make believe,

nothing has happen,

Even though it happen,

in front of you.

Reviews

[Zana]

meaghann sayz YEAH!!!

[Ruth]

Now this is cool!
Makes me think! lol
No specific point, awesome metaphors
Well written
xx

[clauds294]

I really enjoyed this poem, there was something not so random about it to me. It sorta fits in to life it's self but hasn't found a name for what it's describing yet. Awesome job.

[[KL]]

Nice use of blank verse. I also notice there is no underlying theme? Unless you account for randomness.. Which is why this is called Random Poem I'm guessing? Well it fits, I can tell you that :L Great write here, well done (:
[M]

[~ Otto Girl ~]

very random. I am a random person myself so i enjoyied this poem alot.