Today

I had a dream and I wanted to share it! =)

Today, 

I saw you,

for the first time in my life,

You're beautiful,

cute,

funny,

everything any girl would want,

We talked,

and laughed,

we talked for hours,

But it only felt like a second,

you made me blush,

then we laughed again,

you remind me of what we could be,

I go on a journey,

as I look in those beautiful dark brown eyes,

That could hypnotize anyone,

I close my eyes,

You're there,

I make a wish,

But it has already came true,

I fall asleep,

I still feel your presence,

Love,

a four letter word,

that is heard a lot,

when is it true they ask,

when is it truthfully coming from they heart,

Is when you wish,

With all your heart,

That the time spent together,

Will never end,

Like a song,

played over and over,

because you love it so much,

You are my knight,

and I'm the princess,

Thanking you,

For saving my life,

from heart brake and torture,

and seal it,

with a kiss.

Reviews

[Joy Lynn B.]

The other way around my bad!

[Joy Lynn B.]

Yeah come was suppose to be came! lol thanks for pointing that out!

[Seren]

Cheesy choice of favourite on my part, but I liked the line 'You are my knight, / and I'm the princess, / Thanking you, / For saving my life,' because the oldies are the goldies. ^_^
[I'm wondering, was 'has already came true' meant to be 'has already come true'??]

[JenLyn]

Very cute and the flow was nice there was a spelling error "brake" should be "break" but it's just a typo everyone makes those mistakes. These are my favorite lines, as I look in those beautiful dark brown eyes,
That could hypnotize anyone,
I close my eyes,
You're there,
I make a wish,
But it has already came true, I just love the way they sound and flow. Overall a great write, keep it up! :)