My friend

My guy friend's girlfriend broke with him. Which gave me the idea to write a poem for him. It shows that he'll find someone great. but he'll have to wait!

Broken,

That is his heart,

Wishing,

Wishing someone cared,

But still,

no one listens,

Surprised,

No,

That's the world now,

Then,

When it comes to themselves,

They care,

Why,

Why can't we act,

Learn from their mistakes,

Stop being who you're not,

Go,

Go show the world,

That caring guy,

Who doesn't have much,

But has something to give,

It'll be okay,

Go before it's to late,

Which that day,

Could be any day,

Maybe today,

Or tomorrow,

So run,

Hurry,

Run to her,

Love,

Care,

Live,

Laugh,

With the girl who you will meet someday,

Breathe the air that will show,

That someone out there,

Will be all you need

Reviews

[JenLyn]

Not one of my favorite pieces by you, I don't hate it but it just didn't jump out at me like your other writing does, please keep writing, I love reading your work! :)