Him

Him

A Chapter by Joy Lynn B.
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I like a guy right, well I can't tell him I like him so I wrote how I felt(unfortunately for me he still doesn't know)

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Have you ever wanted to tell someone,
you like,
or even more,
love them?

Have you ever wondered,
If they,
love you too?

I understand I may be young,
But there is one thing,
That I will say,
I love him now, 
And I love him today.


© 2010 Joy Lynn B.


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It's cute and it rhymes but it's a little too typical for me, but you know you can write so don't take it the wrong way, it's just not my favorite piece by you. Keep writing though because you know I love to read your work. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good poem but you should take out this part, "I understand I may be young,"
You don't have to if you don't want to but it's a good idea. Good job! Great talent you have!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can relate!!!! You're a great writer sweetie!! Keep it up!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Joy Lynn B.
Joy Lynn B.

Somewhere, FL, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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So, ya my name is already given, if you haven't read it then it's Joy Lynn B.! I love writing poetry and writing songs for me to sing! To bad for me I have to buy music to go with it..... so that make.. more..

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