Life

Life,

Created by man,

And I hope she's his wife.

Life,

A gift no one can uphold,

But everyone can give.

Life,

Explains happiness, 

and sadness.

Life,

Began as man,

Then gave a woman.

Life,

Has a beginning and a end,

Just like a song on the radio.

Reviews

[JenLyn]

I like this piece a lot the only thing that threw me off was the last line. First of all I would have made it into 3 lines like the other stanzas and maybe have chosen different words. Just off the top of my head,
Life,
Living, hoping, dreaming.
Loving, hating, daring.

I know that's not the best writing but I gave it to you as an example of something you may want to do with the last line. Overall the poem, is good, with a nice flow. Keep it up! :)

[St.Jimmy]

wow I love the comparison you did in last stanza of this poem
You've compared life to a song on the radio that a life has it's beginnings and ends like a song on the radio but there are also various aspects of comparison
like you can't choose the song on the radio and same thing is applicable to life we can't choose our life it's not in our hands
All in all I think you have a great talent in writing
Keep shining!
~Aaradhya

[Not A Writer]

You are sure talented for such a young writer! I admire your talent and wish I was as good as you! Keep on writing and never give up Joy.

[Wolfwind Words]

I like the last line. It takes us from the higher area's of thought and brings us back down to the real world we live in. For no matter how much we think, theorize, ponder or wonder. We always have to come back to the daily grind. The analogy to the song on the radio was really brilliant.

Aaron Wolfie Maycroft

[Joy Lynn B.]

Thanks, I lost track on the ending. I guess you caught me! =D