My Few Words

I seriously have no idea what it's really for.

The world goes round fast,

Time never lasts,

So pick up the frown,

Then turn it around,

For the sun only shines,

On the one's who shine with it.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

For me this is about turning a negitive situation into a positive one, learning from your mistakes and growing as a person because life has twists and turns, highs and its lows but the lows have a purpose in your life and make you a much better person. This is a great reminder of that. God and life has so much to teach us and it is time that we are open to that.

[Coyote Poetry]

True wisdom in your words. Need to stay positive. A outstanding poem. Thank you for the hopeful poem.
Coyote

[A.Lee]

I like this one! Especially the last two lines "For the sun only shines / on the ones who shine with it" (just noticed a grammar mistake as I typed that. one's should be ones) A very positive and uplifting piece :)

[Wolfwind Words]

I like it! it's a positive piece that flows with uplifting feelings and energy!

[JenLyn]

This is great, powerful, inspirational but yet short and to the point. Nicely done! Keep it up! :)

[Kristen]

This is short but powerful. It's thought-provoking and flows nicely, good write!

- S.T.