My life

A story about the secret of a young girl

Why,

Why would you do this,

I think one night I get away,

But you come in,

And that's when my nightmare begins,

You cover my mouth with the tape,

then push me into my bed,

after that you start me to undress me,

and all I can do is stay there cause if I do something wrong,

you said you would kill me,

so you start to come in bed with me,

one hand all to close to another,

when I start to cry,

then thankfully someone came to the door,

and opened it,

she caught him,

my parents dail 911,

and they come all so quickly,

when they put him in the car he said he'd be back,

but I know he has more time than I will ever have,

since he is in there for life,

While I'm scarred for life.

Reviews

[Silere]

I don't really know what to say.. so powerful are the emotions that are within your words. I hope your friend isn't truly scarred for life. It sounds like it affected you terribly as well. Writing does help and sharing it with the rest of us hopefully will too. Thank you for sharing!

[JenLyn]

Wow this is just so sad, I'm sorry about your friend. It's such a terrible thing for anyone to go through, I mean just look at how it affected you and you were only her friend. I hope she gets through you and you do too. The poem was a good write, there were problems here and there but it's very raw and emotional (which is good IMO.)

I know I write as a form of therapy and I think that's what you have done here, I just also hope that you have someone to share your feelings with because I know dealing with a situation like this has to bring you indescribable pain and fear.

There was one typo "after that you start me to undress me," I don't think you meant to say me after to start but everyone makes typo mistakes.

A good and emotional write. Keep writing and keep your head up girly!

[Joy Lynn B.]

Um... this is about a friend I have that has been in this position and this is the only way to get the thought out of my head.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

This is horrible event that you have described...I hope that this is not your actual life but one that you heard about and have written a poem that is very descriptive and emotive about the event...If actual life, writing about it will help you to deal with all the feelings..Sunflower...