Confectionary Calamity

Take hold with your teeth

And tear the red flesh apart.

The sour taste conquers you,

But now you're addicted,

Bite again

 

And let the sugar devour

Your burning, whincing tongue.

Let the bittersweet pain

Encompass you

Then fade.

 

Funny how a small red sweetie

Defeats those who dare to eat it.

Author's Note

Jenneh wanted meh to write a poem about a Sour Strawb (a jelly sweet)
At least I didn't have to write one about a whiteboard d: xx

Reviews

[kieran cruz]

Ahh I feel like having one now lol

[Midnight_Mystery]

awesomeness :D

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

That sour taste can be addictive ; )

[M.Babu]

Hahahahahahaha!

"And let the sugar devour
Your burning, whincing tongue.
Let the bittersweet pain
Encompass you
Then fade.

"Funny how a small red sweetie
Defeats those who dare to eat it. "

Very good. XD

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

:P SOUR STRAWB >.< :L x

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Wow man this is so trippy O.O LOVE IT!