Gravity

Fighting against gravity,
I will not stay down.
Fly high not with depravity,
But with life renown.
Stay strong and be sure,
To live it all in highlights.
Make your name the new cure,
While being in the skylights.
Look on forward,
For that's where it's at.
Take a walk in the orchard,
And think about that.

Reviews

[SincerelyMeWithLove]

I never did like how I ended it.

[ambur]

I believe you should rewrite the last two lines. They seem to take away from the poem. The rhythm and rhyme, however, are both good.