I forget the world with you!

I forget the world with you!

A Poem by Abdul Alsaaidi

Whenever grief pass me by
I looked into
your little eyes
Sadness leaves me carefree
I forget the world
and fly

Your tiny hand in my palm lies

As if I were living in paradise

***

© 2014 Abdul Alsaaidi


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It seems like poet referring to a infant or a small child when usually adult especially parents forget the world by being with them, I can be wrong, natural footing and a great write, take care

Posted 10 Years Ago


Abdul Alsaaidi

10 Years Ago

Oh, you do? You must like childern.
What do we call the one under 28 days then?
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

Neonatal is zero to 28 days, one year to three years of age is toddler, then pre school, school age,.. read more
Abdul Alsaaidi

10 Years Ago

Great. Thank you
What a Beautiful story these 6 lines read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Abdul Alsaaidi

10 Years Ago

Thanks....

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Added on April 24, 2014
Last Updated on April 24, 2014
Tags: For my newborn son Daniel.

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Abdul Alsaaidi
Abdul Alsaaidi

London, Wimbledon, United Kingdom



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Chicklit author from Wimbledon, London. First novel The Love Detective due out May 2018! Born out of a need for escapism I create characters and scenarios that I hope will both lift the spirits of .. more..

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