Oh This Depression

 

 

 

 

Oh this pain, this pain

That ferments inside my brain

Is it really, real

Or perhaps, I’m just insane

 

Oh, the hurt, the hurt

The hurt my heart exerts

Some days I scream, and blurt

Or just pray for God’s comfort

 

Oh, the ache, the ache

As if my whole body will soon break

How much more can a girl take

Somebody please help me, PLEASE HELP ME, For Pete’s Sake!

 

Where’s my meds, my meds

Let me take them and go back to bed

So I can sleep off these awful thoughts, that linger inside my head

Maybe I’ll wake up to a better day tomorrow, or hopefully I’ll just be dead

 

Oh this depression, this depression, such a hopless obsession

I think I need a another Physiatrist's session

This is all such an excruciating lesson

Of what one feels like while in a deep depression

 

 

Reviews

[Nakami-sensei]

That was a really nice poem! "So maybe I'll wake up to a better day tomorrow, or hopefully I'll just be dead"
that really sounds like me! xD

[Dezarae]

i enjoyed your poem... i feel for you going thru depression is something i wish no one had to indure.. it sucks and makes one just wish they never were at all.. i understand i have been thru my share of these times... and like i said they suck... but hang in there life gets better.. slowly but it does.. if you apply yourself that is.... well good job i loved the flow and rhyming ... good job....

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

Amazing poem.
I relate to it so well!
especially "So maybe I'll wake up to a better day tomorrow, or hopefully I'll just be dead"
great write
thank you for sharing..

[talulu love]

I LOVE THE RHYMING GOOD JOB I LIKE THE FLOW OF THE POEM ALSO