This Fanta Sea

This Fanta Sea

A Poem by Savannah Sawyer
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Just a sweet (pun intended) poem about the perfect candy land dream :)

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There was once
This dream I had
Of a land so far away

Cotton trees
And licorice grass
This place was made to play

Roads were made
Of chocolate bars
Safe from the lemon head sun

Not until
The peach ringed trees
Did I feel some honest fun

I climbed
And I climbed
And I still climbed some more

I looked
Over the branches
There was much to explore!

This strange dream
Has got me now
This is better than I know

Oh my my!
Think what it's like
When this place begins to snow!

Sprinkle flakes
Of candy snow
Which I catch upon my tongue

Imagine
Summertime
Sweet candy rays of sun

Think of
Candy corn
Grown up from this dream itself

Snow caps
And Fanta seas
From real life this dream excels

© 2013 Savannah Sawyer


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Savannah Sawyer
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This is a wonderful dream. I would love to go there. Great description, very lovely poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


How clever! I enjoyed the play on words!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very fun read. Kind of has a Dr. Seuss flavor to it. Good work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2013
Last Updated on October 20, 2013
Tags: chocolate, sweet, candy, fun, cute, yummy, food

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Savannah Sawyer
Savannah Sawyer

Norwalk, OH



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